
I had a lot of ideas for this one.
The first being light trails - either from above the motorway or from inside a moving car. But we've already seen a few of those for street (some really fantastic ones too!) and I think we may see a few more this week . . . so I wanted to do something different.
However, there were two more ideas that I had, that I just couldn't shake.
Although my rules say that if I do show more than one shot, I'll clearly identify the chosen one . . . this week I just can't decide.
Both have flaws, both also have some merit - and I like them both for completely different reasons.
C&C welcome as always.
At the end of the year, I'm planning on getting the 52 printed as a photobook, so please try to help me decide which of these shots will make it
Week 5 Speed - Shot No.1
This is a composite of 3 different images (attached below)
To put it in context, I was thinking about what speed actually means . . . it's a measure of how fast something moves usually measured by distance and time. So for this shot I wanted to incorporate something that gave a feeling of motion but also brought in the concept of time and distance.
(That sounds really arty doesn't it?

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These are the shots that it's made up from :

What I like
- I think it will be a totally different interpretation to anything anyone else has done.
- The graphic Sci-Fi effect that I was hoping for has worked
- My opinion and my opinion only (feel free to disagree), but I think that it has some real visual impact.
What I don't like
- The third "leg" of the hour glass just behind the glass looks odd. I've tried cloning it out completely, blurring it, sharpening it more and this is the version that works best. Just wish it wasn't there though.
- The radial blur on the raindrops has given the motion feel I wanted, but it's left them a lot softer than in the original.
Week 5 Speed - Shot 2

I don't think that this one needs much explanation, other than to say that the substance is actually flour - and not anything else!

I've deliberately made it quite dark and the graininess and red tint were added in PP.
What I like
- I tried about 20 different shots for this. What I liked about this version was the intimacy of the composition.
- The DoF worked as I'd planned. Focal point on the end of the note and the end of the line of flour (which is where I want the viewers eye to be) and the hand slightly blurred.
What I don't like
There were a few compromises in this one in order to get the atmosphere that I wanted. . .
- The downside of the close, intimate composition is that my thumb looks slightly odd - due to the angle and foreshortening effect. My thumb really ISN'T that deformed

- I like the way that the mirror has worked to reflect the note, but the reflection of the flour looks a bit blobby and undefined.
- I think the grainy PP adds to the mood I want, but it's at the expense of some of the sharpness of the original.