Hi Sarah
Catching up.
Mineral - just a comment on the Perrier which i like. Good colour and symmetry with nice clean glasses. Nice touch capturing the condensation on the bottom of bottle
Dark - Works well for the theme. Nice 'floor' and i like the focus and the delicacy of the white colour
Time - great title

. The mono suits it and the pp is superb and apt.
Body - focus looks v good, and dof is enough to capture the body and the flower on which it is sitting. Nice touch with the pollen on the belly - it illustrates how pollination takes place.
Liquid - Good colour, capture of outline of the glass and the reflection of part of the glass, which I think is enough. Not sure about the top surface of the liquid as it seems slightly oof and a bit grey. But minor niggle.
Soft reshoot - thoroughly excellent. looks a high quality bear and you have reflected this in the shot. Great depth of colour and I really like the darkish treatment.
All really good stuff