Hey Andy,
Wow that was a brave thing smoking for your Living shot (especially if you don't normally smoke). I must say when I looked at the shot before reading the text I didn't quite see the connection ... but then the penny dropped. You've already mentioned the other critique so I won't repeat. Well done though.
You should have issued a warning to wear

to view #1 of light .... I have been blinded

I find the half tucked in shirt and jeans a bit distracting ... but that's probably because I'm always telling Roo to tuck his shirt in

The focus is certainly better in #1, but I have to say the facial expression in #2 seems to fit the idea of the subject better.
Also on #2 there is some marks on the white background that could do with cloning out, by you head, fingers and right of the image.
Now I'm going to need a few moments to regain my sight before viewing others projects
Well done
Cheers
Dawn