



I always update the thread title as soon as I've posted new photos. You were just a little too quick, that's all. As for the feedback, I was late with Magical and haven't been commenting much on other peoples' photos lately so I'm not expecting a huge amount of comments on mine! I will try and catch up, though.Hi Nathalie can you edit the title of your thread, i think the reason you haven't had any response to your post's is that it looks like you've dropped out![]()
I always update the thread title as soon as I've posted new photos. You were just a little too quick, that's all. As for the feedback, I was late with Magical and haven't been commenting much on other peoples' photos lately so I'm not expecting a huge amount of comments on mine! I will try and catch up, though.




I agree - it needs more DOF!Vice yes i can see that, i think maybe the DOV is a little too shallow on this
I've uploaded a new version, with the door central.minor niggle, theres more space on the left than right and i think to work really well it ought to be central in the frame
I was shooting at too shallow DOF really - a bit more and it wouldn't have been a problem. Something to keep in mind for next time.Vice, great idea and on theme but I think you've focussed on the front of the cup rather than the chocolate topping of the drink which would have been better. Well lit though.
I've uploaded a new crop, with more space at the top. As for the light and the shadows, I know what you mean and it's annoying but I wasn't in a position to hang around and wait for either cloud cover or the sun to move enough in the sky. It is what it is: a snapshot!Entrance, lovely old door and liking the black and white which helps focus on the detail and texture of the door.
My only critique is that the light when you took it was bright as the shadow at the top of the door's distracting which then makes me focus up there and then realise that you've cropped the top of the arch off too.

I'd go so far as too say it's the sort of image that would suit a canvas & be sold in that well known swedish home store HI Nathalie
what a lovely idea for the theme & very soft indeed , the mono suits it well & like the angle so for thatI'd go so far as too say it's the sort of image that would suit a canvas & be sold in that well known swedish home store
DOF I think will be marmite....for me I'd prefer slightly more , maybe just enough to get the centre in focus & leave the outer petals oof .Still , no highlights , some nice soft shadows where they should be![]()





Coffee and caffeine are personal "addictions" of mine....

Composition is spot on DOF has produced great softness as has the lighting. B&W was great choice. Big well done for the one. Do me a favoure...get it printed, placed in a nice frame and....send it to me....It is more than a tad orange! In reality, the ring is actually titanium and it looks nothing like gold (grey, basically). I wanted it to look like gold, though, and because of the lighting used, it came out looking like - or at least very close to - this. I did a little bit of tweaking in PP.Magical...liking it. Liking TolkienGreat composition, nice low angle. Just looks a tad orange to me
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I agree with you about the DOF. Overexposure -- according to camera raw there are no clipped highlights, but the lighting is slightly uneven and there are areas that are brighter than the rest. The photo was taken by the window with natural light only.Like it..again. Nice and close. For me, though, I'm not keen on the over exposed top section and the DOF is too shallow.
Agreed -- shadows are not good.Entrance. Nice. I've done a few of them. Again you got in close and composed well. I'd like to see more contrast and I'm not keen on the shadows.
Thank you very much, Andy!Soft, I have to say...this is my favourite for Soft...Composition is spot on DOF has produced great softness as has the lighting. B&W was great choice. Big well done for the one. Do me a favoure...get it printed, placed in a nice frame and....send it to me....
or get it on your wall
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Got to say the rose picture is excellent a very simple image but really hard to pull off. It is nicely composed.
Thank you, both.Nathalie, soft, simply perfect. Iain

This is what it looks like in colour:I can see why you did B&W and it works but it does make me want to see him in colour, but then theres the blanket like you said.
