weekly Minx 52 for 2017

Great idea, and nicely composed, but what other have already said about the WB and maybe a contrast boost.
 
grey, as you image is mainly white, the camera exposes it incorrectly, so it needs a little boost in post

s but I do agree on the white being o

and a play with the WB would lift it a little.

I agree with the above crit about the WB issue,

but what other have already said about the WB

Hmmmm I like the image, but wonder that the colour may not be far off, cream carpet and cream lining looks okay to me, I wouldn't expect white carpet and white slipper linings, could of course be wrong :D

Thank you Dark Knight the White Balance is indeed perfectly fine as both the slippers and background are cream and not white
 
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I like that Alison - a terrific piece of street art. What an excellent interpretation for Hairy too. Very nice.
 
Nice bit of street art, well captured with just enough context.
 
Great bit of artwork, looked on your flickr as I was hoping to see a wider shot to see what the surrounding area was like. (y)
 
Great bit of artwork, looked on your flickr as I was hoping to see a wider shot to see what the surrounding area was like. (y)

I have just uploaded my other shots including a panoramic of the full scene
 
Really liking the Hairy pic. Street art can be brilliant and you've really caught the essence of it (y)
 
Cracking bit of street art and well photographed, fits the theme, love it.
 
That's really nice Alison - I like that. Beautiful colours against the plain white fg & bg and still managing to ground the "marbles".
 
Hi Alison,
Hairy - I think the angle helps, a square on shot would not be as dramatic, it's certainly the most odd but on theme shot for the subject.
Good choice of this one over the wider shots.

Mineral - Much better white balance ;)
I agree with Carl, it works really well against the white background, yet still grounds the marbles rather than has them floating in space.
 
I like that, nicely lit and very colourful against the white fluffy background.
 
What's not to like, nice lighting, nice colours. You've kept the fluffiness in the cotton wool, my only comment it would be it seems a little tight on the left side only by a smidge. Would be nice if it matched the other side (y)
 
I think with the first one nearly dead centre I would have used that one as the focus point allowing all the others to slowly fade away. (y)
 
Good idea nesting your marbles in cottonwool.
 
Thanks every one for the comments all very welcome the fluffy base was to keep the marbles from rolling away and I made sure to sort out my white balance this time
as the background was meant to be white.

Well done with the lighting too - I like the very even double highlight on each.

looking at the highlights I realise there is a bulb out on our ceiling light I have since replaced it
 
Structure - I like the crop on this image, the tiny black spot in the top left of the image I would of cloned out. Other than that I like the dream like feel the image has, and the fact that the clouds and the water blend into each other nicely in the distance.
 
I like the letterbox crop and the blending of the sea and the sky at the horizon. And I also like the feeling of isolation that comes from the structure being so small in the frame.
 
I thought it was Brighton to begin with - Herne Bay eh! must make a point of dropping by sometime. Yes, I too like the framing, isolation and subtle pastel colours.
 
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