John's Photo 52 - Week 27 Added (10th July) - Highlight

Hey, don't be downheartened, I REALLY like that shot, I like the crop you've got on it, the colours of the building[being simple, but striking] against the fun-ness of the Disney clock :thumbs: ace!
 
That works very well so don't have a downer on yourself...;)

The colours and position within the frame are all good and well focused...:clap:

and it fits the theme, so well done...:thumbs:
 
I like the compositon and it fits the theme well imo however, it looks a little flat to me maybe some contrast / saturation to gie it some punch :shrug:
 
Don't think "The Late Police" would worry too much if you posted something late...these challenges are for ourselves in my opinion...I would have no worries posting something late to get the shot I wanted....

Well done for being on holiday and still thinking about the challenge ;)
 
Hey, don't be downheartened, I REALLY like that shot, I like the crop you've got on it, the colours of the building[being simple, but striking] against the fun-ness of the Disney clock ace!

Thank you

That works very well so don't have a downer on yourself...;)

The colours and position within the frame are all good and well focused...

and it fits the theme, so well done...

Thanks Marcus

I like the compositon and it fits the theme well imo however, it looks a little flat to me maybe some contrast / saturation to gie it some punch

Thanks Ruth, I'll take a look at that.

Don't think "The Late Police" would worry too much if you posted something late...these challenges are for ourselves in my opinion...I would have no worries posting something late to get the shot I wanted....

Well done for being on holiday and still thinking about the challenge

:D, The late Police might not, but I'm trying really hard not to fall behind as I might end up just stopping. I know that for my summer holiday I will fall behind, as I'll be away for a couple of weeks.
 
I think the thing I've got from this challenge is that sometimes life gets in the way and you have to make do with what you've got. You've managed a shot that fits the theme, I agree it could do with a bit more punch, but that's easy enough to do. Well done for getting it done and don't worry if some weeks are better than others. :thumbs:

Mark:)
 
I think the thing I've got from this challenge is that sometimes life gets in the way and you have to make do with what you've got. You've managed a shot that fits the theme, I agree it could do with a bit more punch, but that's easy enough to do. Well done for getting it done and don't worry if some weeks are better than others. :thumbs:

Mark:)

I totally agree with Mark. My pic this week is 'making do with what I've got' because I just didn't have any time (ironically, given the theme!) Like you, I try to keep up every week, because if I get behind I'll be sunk! So please don't beat yourself up - there's at least 2 of us in the same boat this week. :)

Oh - and the picture - well done. I always think Disney Park buildings look like theatrical backdrops - not quite real - and you've caught this beautifully. :thumbs:

Jean
 
Hey, don't be downheartened, I REALLY like that shot, I like the crop you've got on it, the colours of the building[being simple, but striking] against the fun-ness of the Disney clock :thumbs: ace!

Agree entirely with the above!

The crop makes it for me!

And as for late - I'm rapidly losing it myself :)

Good shot John :)
 
I think the thing I've got from this challenge is that sometimes life gets in the way and you have to make do with what you've got. You've managed a shot that fits the theme, I agree it could do with a bit more punch, but that's easy enough to do. Well done for getting it done and don't worry if some weeks are better than others.

Mark

Cheers Mark.

I totally agree with Mark. My pic this week is 'making do with what I've got' because I just didn't have any time (ironically, given the theme!) Like you, I try to keep up every week, because if I get behind I'll be sunk! So please don't beat yourself up - there's at least 2 of us in the same boat this week.

Oh - and the picture - well done. I always think Disney Park buildings look like theatrical backdrops - not quite real - and you've caught this beautifully.

Jean

Thanks Jean, promise no self beatings going on here ;). I've got a few more, that when I get the chance :bang:, I'll post up...

Agree entirely with the above!

The crop makes it for me!

And as for late - I'm rapidly losing it myself

Good shot John

Cheers John :thumbs:
 
Here's the boosted version

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Thanks Jean
 
I was really struggling for errm :thinking: inspiration for this week. Then it occurred to me, something that I often find very inspiring is music, and in fact my eldest is learning a number of instruments, and this has inspired me to once again get out my flute. I decided, given the size of a double bass (he's only 11, and the bass is as big as me...) that trying to get a shot of the whole thing wasn't going to work. So I used my Nifty and the Jessops flash to light it. I wanted to go for a dreamy look and feel with the processing.

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I wasn't sure which worked best for the dreamy look, but I think I'm edging more towards the Mono shot (I know which one Dizzy would prefer :D).

Lessons

1) Inspiration can strike at any time (I'm sure I've said that one before)
2) Roll with it
3) If you can get the shot down early, all the better
 
Complex - Lovely shot, and I appreciate how difficult it is shooting shiny things so well done on that front. Like the composition too :thumbs:

Time - Much prefer the boosted version and again the composition is great. Even the weather vane is pointing in the right direction!

Inspiration - I think you have captured the dreamy look you were after best with the mono shot. For me it's a bit too dreamy TBH.
 
Thank you DS. On Inspiration, what do you think, more DoF perhaps including the tuning key ?
 
Colour works best, and lovely take on the theme. Really like the DOF in this, too.
Think I will scrap my shots I've taken and re-think for this week :lol:
 
Inspiration - I think you have captured the dreamy look you were after best with the mono shot. For me it's a bit too dreamy TBH.

:agree: I do like it but think you have over done the dof a tad to much for my liking. I prefer the colour one, but find the two white dots of the flash very distracting, a quick clone out and it would be much better. Overall I think it fits the theme very well and works well.
 
Love the boosted version John, great interpretation and spot on composition. :clap::clap::clap:

And don´t worry about posting late or missing a couple of weeks, it happens to all of us. For Emotion I had to post a ´here´s one I took earlier´ picture as I wasn´t able to get out that week.

Inspìration - I prefer the colour version and would like a tad more DoF too, and I think we are all going to struggle with an interpretation this week if we don´t explain it first. So it fits the brief for me :thumbs:
 
Colour works best, and lovely take on the theme. Really like the DOF in this, too.
Think I will scrap my shots I've taken and re-think for this week

Thank you. Don't scrap them, they are valid for you.

I do like it but think you have over done the dof a tad to much for my liking. I prefer the colour one, but find the two white dots of the flash very distracting, a quick clone out and it would be much better. Overall I think it fits the theme very well and works well.

Thanks Marcus, Something for a reshoot, deeper DOF. I hadn't noticed the flash pattern reflection :bang:

Love the boosted version John, great interpretation and spot on composition.

And don´t worry about posting late or missing a couple of weeks, it happens to all of us. For Emotion I had to post a ´here´s one I took earlier´ picture as I wasn´t able to get out that week.

Inspìration - I prefer the colour version and would like a tad more DoF too, and I think we are all going to struggle with an interpretation this week if we don´t explain it first. So it fits the brief for me

Thanks Jill. It's less about posting late and more about falling behind... I have enough trouble finding time in the week to do what I have to do, let alone carry on with the 52... If I fall behind, I may never catch up. I do like the shallow DOF effects :nuts:, but I think I've probably overdone it on this one and it's not to everyone's taste. Given how tricky the theme is (nigh on impossible) I agree that we are going to have to explain (unless someone has an obvious muse they are keeping secret stashed away somewhere :D.
 
ok honestly i had no idea what it was until i read what you had written :/

That said i perfer the colour version and i like the way the strings lead you in :)
 
The black and white works best for me, as others have said f2 is probably a bit open for this. It well composed though, cuts across the page well.
 
Thank you DS. On Inspiration, what do you think, more DoF perhaps including the tuning key ?

Sorry it's taken me a while to reply - if I knew what a turning key was I'd probably say yes :D

Seriously though - I do think more DOF would improve it by making it a bit less abstract and able to illustrate the theme more sucessfully.
 
Colour for me. very good photograph. May'be a tad more DOF as well
:clap:
 
ok honestly i had no idea what it was until i read what you had written :/

That said i perfer the colour version and i like the way the strings lead you in :)

Thanks Ruth

The black and white works best for me, as others have said f2 is probably a bit open for this. It well composed though, cuts across the page well.

Thanks, gotcha...

Sorry it's taken me a while to reply - if I knew what a turning key was I'd probably say yes :D

Seriously though - I do think more DOF would improve it by making it a bit less abstract and able to illustrate the theme more sucessfully.

Gotcha... The tuning key is the paddle shaped shiny bit.

Colour for me. very good photograph. May'be a tad more DOF as well
:clap:

Thanks Corky..

Ok, I've reshot with more DOF, and worked out a way to reduce the glare of the flash on the shiny wood... Is this better ?

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:D... if I'm honest, I prefer the first one too..
 
I prefer the first John tbh for the 'feel' and the colours and that dreaminess, but I just wish there was a point on the strings perhaps at the very end that was in focus!

Almost there...just not quite :(

Great idea nonetheless :thumbs:
 
Cheers John, that makes sense :thumbs: I'll mark this up for the next reshoot card, along with most of the others :D.
 
Just catching up. :)

Wow - you've given us a lot of options, here John. :D

My favourite is the mono one. I love the abstract-ness (? - if it isn't a word, it should be!) and the b&w works well with the instrument. :clap::clap:

The colours are quite vibrant in both versions and I think they could detract from the Inspiration that is music. But, having said that - if the shot was, say a Fender I think the colour versions would win. :)

Jean
 
Thanks very much Jean :thumbs:
 
I struggled with this one, more through lack of time than anything else. I had planned last night on trying to do something with a couple of previous shots, but that seemed to be beyond my editing abilities. However, just now, I was making a cuppa and saw this going on outside the window... To me, this showed a clear case of wishing for some further development to take place.. (or at least it ought to :D). It's a bit of a grab shot (not a lot of choice, the feeding took all of maybe a minute), but I'm glad I caught it.

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haha, like the take
 
Thanks everyone.

Sorry Jean ;) They just set themselves up for it. There is one little bit of it I'm not happy with, I know what caused it, but I can't process it out (I just don't know the tools :()
 
Hi John, sorry for late replies, just catching up!

Complex:
Being a fan of abstracts, I really like this shot. Theres a good use of negative space and the lighting and clarity all good!

Time:
I love Disney, and I thought the first was a good capture, til I saw your second, that really does capture the colours and the feel of Disney.

Inspiration:
I really like the first shot also, I can see the point about the flash lights, but I still think it is the best of the bunch in terms of atmosphere.

Development:
Excellent shot! I have also tried to take shots of birds, and it is really hard to get them in focus cos they keep flippin movin!! You have caught the action and the colours and texture in their plumage beautifully!

:clap: :clap: :clap:
 
Thanks Angela, glad the exams are done with, good luck with the results.

I'm still struggling with effective use of flash, I much prefer brightly lit conditions, when it's all out of my control, and I'm not trying to add anything extra... It's a whole new art in it's own right, and I haven't got the normal stuff sorted out properly yet :).

As for birds, I've taken on board advice I got from here and always try to get the highest shutter speed I can, whilst trying to minimise noise. I've shot at high ISO in reasonably good conditions to hit shutter speeds of 1/1000 and sometimes that's still not enough :bang:. Of course, with only a 250mm lens, I'm limited on my target opportunities, cos most of them are just too far away.
 
What a well spotted shot :thumbs:

It certainly looks like they are planning some kind of development :)

Well caught and well framed :clap::clap:
 
Thanks very much Jill
 
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