Relaxation - Nice photo and interpretation that definietly says relaxation. As you and others said the DoF is perhaps a bit shallow and would have resolved the focus point.
Grave - I preferred 'resting in grace'. I think a shallower DoF on this one, blowing out the rear with a focus point on the hand would be interesting, but I like it as it is to.
Nice attention to detail on 'sitting in grace', I like how you have framed it evenly on the right and left. The lighting is very good, I have never shot in a church but I image lighting isn't easy.
Endings - The black and white gives it a cold look, the hands look dirty which does add to it as this brings into question the motive behind the 'ending' with the dirty hands being the only clue. The black background works but it doesn't jump out at me as it should, I don't know if that is the image or because I may be desensitised to things like this because I am a big thriller/horror fan! Good effort mate.
Electric - Its a picture of a fuse.. but I really like it! I like how the Amperes and standard are towards the camera, I like the detail and sharpness of the image. Simple yet effective! I prefer your first image,
Transform - I like the sequence and when I think transform I instantly think transformers and so for me it couldn't encompass the theme are more than it does. I do think I would have preferred it with a single image of the car mid transform rather than a sequence though. Good effort.
Mobile - I can see what you were going for with the first image frame between the trees however it doesn't really work for me. The second image does work for me, the bonnet reflection is noticeable but the figure draws my attention first. Nice shot. The crop is much nicer.
Surfaces - I like this image, I prefer the mono by far, its gritty and dark, good composition.
Light - I prefer your second attempt at light but I think some PP to make the trees and houses silhouettes would have been nice but then I seen your crop and i think that is even better. For me the darker clouds make the beam of light more prominent.
Project - I like the image, nice clarity and a clear sky, you don't get that often up north! The laser doesn't work at all for me and I think your edit has greatly improved the image. Maybe a crop removing the lower buildings would also add the the image but I'm not sure.
Film - I like the texture the film is sat on and the lighting works for me, a few people shot similar and they came out very well, who'd have thought a roll of film was so photogenic! I also prefer your edit of this.
Dirty - Took me a second to realise what it was, I am against the majority as this doesn't really work for me but I can't put my finger on why. A good interpretation.
Rage - He doesn't look angry enough to say rage to me, but then my own attempt at this doesn't say rage either! Your sun images are an very unique interpretation and although also doesn't say rage to me I like your second sun image, it looks different to the usual solar flare shots of the sun you see and also makes my eyes go a bit crazy! Nice shot and an interesting set up!
