Matt/Sue some nice shots in there, cant add much more to what everybody else has said, not a bad effort for a first go, that cake shot, im really sorry Matt but does absolutely nothing for me, you need to have something in focus for lensbaby shots to work, the statue head to the right would have been good, but to me it looks like its the top of the cake/flower in focus. Are you leaving the central focus point active for these ? may be why everything is central ?
You really need to concentrate on framing etc for all of your shots, specially if you intend to offer this to people, remember the last thing you want happening is the same thing you are now doing to this photographer, his shots may not be up to much as you say, but someone could end up doing the same to yours. Remember the bride and groom will not enjoy being posed time and time again for the same shots, if you get something a little wrong, i had this experience at my friends wedding in Liverpool Cathedral, the female tog, kept doing shots over and over, and re posing friends and family to the point where they were late for the family meal by 45 minutes ! the bride and groom were seething at this point ! You are under extreme time constraints normally, to produce shots the couple and family are happy with, and thats for the usual "set" shots.
Sorry i went on a bit there lol
The boy on the chair shot is ace well done Sue
