great idea Dawn! Works really well and I like the way you have done something a bit different from the norm (just the way I like it!!)
I really like how the images fit together in a topical point of view, but colourwise they dont really seem to fit...my mind screams "I want something red!!" in the centre image (if that makes sense).
Plus....and this is just me and really is not meant to offend...but the xray just reminds me of Jackass The Movie. If no one reading this has seen it, just ignore my comment, you don't need to know....
great stuff Dawn
look forward to next week!
Dawn, I like the creativity if your week 5 and I love the story behind the lightbulb pic however I don't think it works with the other two images.
I wish I had your creativity...I don't know how you think these up but they are brilliant!
Fortunately it came out in one piece, slightly corroded by the stomach acid though What a great and original idea for week 5 Dawn. Well done!![]()
What a great and original idea for week 5 Dawn. Well done!![]()
Hiya Dawn, a cracking image set there, I quite like it in colour, but I must say I do like the black and white conversion on your flickr, also I think the photograph of the Ice Cubes on its own is great. Very well done indeed.
Hiya Dawn!
Just saw your entry for this week theme! I like the story and creativity you have shown again! My critique is only towards the last picture. Compared with the other two it is too colorful and appears a bit lighter than the other two. I mean the first two have this dim lighting effect on them, whilst the last is clearer. I am not sure if you will understand what I mean!
Anyway, love the idea and I am happy to hear that you didn't struggle for inspiration.
Rayna
I know what you mean though.Again with the striking creativity, good work!
Prefer the black and white version personally, removes the dominance from the last image and makes the triptych come together for me.

Well, you're done a stunner there.
I suspect very few people would have thought about cheating and sneaking three into one...
#2, made me cringe!
Cheers.


)Hiya Dawn,
Great works and still time left to relax before the next theme (apart from of course your 365 and the contributions you make on here- so no time really). This is a really novel idea and the triptych really works with these images. I appreciate you and others have felt the x-ray needed colour but thats not really the case in my opinion. Its an x-ray- they are monochrome- its part of your hard to swallow set, so, by definition it fits and works and if anything provides contrast.
I looked at the larger clearer components of this on your flickr which gave me a greater appreciation of the triptych when I returned, as the smaller format on here does not show the greater detail. I like the strict rows of the marbles and the colours too were better appreciated after seeing them larger.
Really nice set Dawn
(btw which part did you have in mind that related to my zip shot, was it Hard Balls or the whole Hard to Swallow, lol)
Martin![]()


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)Hi Dawn,
I like your logicand it is nice to know that one of my images was inspirational.
Martin

Hiya Dawn,
I think all could stand alone, so I'll "crit" them individually;
Marbles (are they mine at all? probably not but I seem to have lost mine a while ago)
You've got the good, glassy texture but for me all the reflections are a bit distracting, I find it hard to look at any area without then looking at the reflections. Just had a look at the exif and you were shooting at iso800 stopped down to f36. With a shot like that it might have been better to open up a bit and go for a long exposure and a tripod in a room with very subdued lighting. For iso800 though its looks very clean and the focus is spot on.
X-Ray
Looks a bit overexposed to me........................ (sorry)
As an image between the other two, a very good choice and a great story. If you had given him some lemon juice to drink it might have actually lit up as well.
Ice
Out of all 3 this is my favourite, I really like the refraction within the ice and the surface detail with the cracks etc and the purpley-turquise underneath really gives a good highlight and atmosphere. Did you know that if you flicker a flame at ice it goes uber clear like a crystal? I don't think it was needed for this shot but if you ever do it again just something to try.
Looking forward to next week. Going well Dawn![]()
You mention about the reflections ... but actually when I was composing the image that was the one thing that stood out the most for me, i.e., it is a very busy image with all the colours so thought the light reflections would draw the attention to the eye, perhaps it hasn't worked as I intended it to. Glad you looked at the Exif, indeed I used a high ISO as I was trying to create as much detail as possible, marbles can be quite a soft and boring subject as far as detail and contour are concerned. You are right though about the fx, but then I shot these on A-Dep mode and even though the focus seemed to be spot on, perhaps the other settings weren't quite right. I am still trying to figure out how to adjust other settings in this mode and it seems a bit 'hit and miss' at times. Although I did try a few in manual mode too. Another reason I went for the higher ISO was because I was shooting in poor lighing from above, but then was also playing with my alternative lighting, i.e., 20W halogen lamps, x2, one on either side from various positions, below, above and from the side. So a very experimental shot.
) As for the lemon juice, I think we are a few years too far gone now for that one
(but I appreciate the idea).Hi Dawn
yet another stunning image....oh to have half your creativity & ability .
3 great ideas on the theme ,the x-ray works well as it is & love the colors in the marblesNot seen the full B&W set but imagine it may work as well if not better .
You certainly set a high target in this challenge . Your shots are very inspirational & I look forward each week to seeing what you've come up with
ps : I've just put a query up regarding "how to do" a tryptic & then I spotted your latest shot:bang: It's something I really want to try for a particular shot but have no idea how to create it


blimey, just had to read back over a few weeks to catch up
Creativity is both a gift and talent, some have it naturally, some have to practice, which ever way, you certainly have it dawn.
I appreciate how difficult the project is, I wouldn't keep up
kudos for keeping up with it so far, brilliant photo's so far and week 5 is no exception, well done![]()
Hi Dawn,
Another good take on the weekly topic. Looking at the larger pictures on your Flickr page you get a better appreciation to the work you have undertaken and especially the colours in the images.
Like others i like the marbles picture on its own but in the smaller triptych it looks a little too colourful because the ice has lost some of it's colour in the conversion versionto this size triptych.
For this file size i think i would go with the b&w version of the tryptich.
Keep up with all your hard work, i for one look forward to your contributions to the weekly 52 project
Best Wishes
Ceri
Hi Dawn, another unusual and imaginative take on the theme - you have a very creative imagination.
Individually they are all great images which have a lot of interest, but for me they don't go well together. The marbles pic especially seems to jar a bit with the other two.
The ice shot is very appealing and I would love to see that on it's own. Just looked at it on your flickr and I think it's a very beautiful image on it's own. In fact it's one of my favourites this week.
I love the story about your brother - I assume he suffered no lasting harm.
Cheers, Patrick
PS for the triptychs - would a narrower border work better?
I had fun with this one .... even though I would not have normally put all the images together as an image from a professional point of view, but for the fun on this project I had to do so.
. The only thing he has to contend with now is te embarrasement, especially as through this project it has all come to life again. Another great interpretation of the theme, well done![]()
Hiya Dawn,
How old was your brother? about 7/8??
Love that combi.
How did you photograph the Radiograph (technical term for 'an x-ray' - x-ray is just the radiation used, so ner)
Nice and straight x-ray good positioning, got the symph on, no marker and hips seem to be too out-turned, but other then that, the radiographer should be pleased!
Bang on exposure too, especially being as this was about 20 years ago with real film, and no AEC (Kind of auto setting)
Was this all that was on the radiograph, or was there more abdo?
I've never seen glass come across so clearly as the lightbulb glass on that shot...
(really sorry, taking them things is my job!!!)
rest of the shots, I also really like...
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just re-read the post and spent more of the time critiquing the 20ys old x-ray then your shots!!!
sorry...
in my defence, i had just recently come home from work spending all day taking that kind of thing!!!!
love the ice shot...

Hi Dawn
Can't really add much more than has already been said - a different approach to what many have found to be a difficult theme, but finding a different angle and producing a stunning image is what I am beginning to expect of you - keep up the good work, I look forward to your next one.
Simon
Hi Dawn
I love the idea of the triptych and must commend whoever is responsible for keeping the x-ray
I love the ice shot! I also love the skill of the marble shot. I think all three are hard shots so...guess you got the theme![]()

we'd never get away with taking an x-ray of the whole patient like that nowadays...
can't believe i was so far out on the age of him, though!
I really do like the ideas of three in one images, may have to try one myself...
can't wait to seeing your clutter!
(perhaps you could just post the same image without the... bowel contents cropped out!!!!)
and I have to say, your hand made light box is probably better then some of the ones we still have cluttering the hospital nowadays!
and speaking as a radiographer, you don't want to know the kinds of things we see...
(have in the past placed a bet with one of the SAU nurses about what coin a patient swallowed (and won, it was a £2.00 coin, and the two metals were just about distinguishable!!))
It's already been announced as 'Clutter'
It has photographed very well. Looking at that image it has certainly kept well. Amazing what kids swallow, thankfully my daughter has not done anything like that. (hope I haven't spoke to soon there!)
and loaned me the x-rays. The good thing now is that they are now 'digital' images, so she doesn't have to worry about them fading (although the originals seem to be quite well preserved).