Absolutely agree - I apologise if it appears I am not receiving the critique in the right manner - in some cases these appeared a bit too blunt, which isnt always the best approach, as people receive criticism im different ways and at the time, it probably got my back up a little - however looking back at the comments and having a chance to digest and reinterpret them, I agree with them most and will take them all onboard to develop myself.
I am attempting to get everything as right as I can in camera, purely because I hate post processing and prefer to shoot.
Your list of negatives is spot on and I am going to be working on all of these in the coming months, I may continue to post on this thread to hopefully showcase my improvements and also show that I am indeed listening to the advice given.
Currently researching and practicing posing and directing at the moment and will be putting my learnings into practice over the coming days.