Work for a new project.

[Kimmy]

Hi all. not really sure if these images are suitable but i am sure someone will tell me if they are not. I am working on a new project on emotions and feeling and would love some feedback and my current "test" images.

suicide1 by Kimberly Holder, on Flickr

light by Kimberly Holder, on Flickr

Kat1 by Kimberly Holder, on Flickr

DSC_2029 by Kimberly Holder, on Flickr

DSC_1998 by Kimberly Holder, on Flickr

All comments welcome.

 

[danpug]

You might get more responses if you post them in the people photo section just below

 

[juggler]

You might get more responses if you post them in the people photo section just below

@Kimmy Hit report and ask a mod to move the thread?

I like what you're doing but I'm finding them a bit over-staged / contrived / explicit. Maybe if you didn't have the pills and the vodka and the knife all so clearly in shot they'd work better? Perhaps have them in the reflection in the mirror or slightly out of focus. Or perhaps have them in focus but not the figure.

It might be more convincing if instead of arranging each scene and pose, you got an actor to actually go (slowly) through the motions of getting the pills out etc, letting them arrange more organically, and timed your shots carefully.