Website revamp

Just had a quick flick/click through and didn't notice anything, others might though. I like the password protected galleries, that's a great feature to have! :thumbs:
 
KL755 said:
As per the thread title, I have revamped and modernised my website, would the good people of TP kindly take a minute of their time to run the rule over it, check for bad links, spelling errors and the like?

The address is www.kevinlines.co.uk


Thanks! :)
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Not a mistake but referring to yourself in the third person always seems weird/affected to me. Why not just say 'I am an experienced Editorial, PR, Commercial and Advertising photographer based in Welwyn Garden City, Hertfordshire'? Also the adjectives in that sentence shouldn't be capitalised.
 
Spotted some typos:

Selected clients include - Tesco, Renault Trucks, Barratt Homes, SAAB, Zelley's Jewllers, Special Retail Group, Triodos Bank, Hertfordshire County Council, MotivAction Group, Campaign Works, Brasserie Gerard Restauants, The Co-op Group, Queenswood School, Hertfordshire Life Magazine, FIRA, PoHwer charity, NAPP, Viyella & Country Casuals, Murphy's Construction, Diffusion Alloys, John Lewis, Grant Shapps MP, Avdel, Veolia, Altro, Young Epilepsy, Glaxo, East Herts Council, Carl Zeiss, Olympic Delivery Authority (ODA), Paycheck, Fishpools, Hostelling International.
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Hi Kevin. My tuppence worth: the font for the text under the pics on the home page is a bit at odds with the scheme. Serif fonts rarely work on screen. I also think the line length is a bit too long. Noticed this text is in a table, any particular reason why? Your contact details at the foot of the page are almost invisible, font color such a light gray, almost not worth being there.
I noticed that when you enlarge the font size in the browser, the text on the page increases in size, but the nav at the top doesn't. Perhaps reconsider?
 
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Just to add PR should stay capitalised as it's an acronym, apologies for the confusion! I would also put only a limited number of your highest profile clients (3/4) on the home page, and stick the rest in 'portfolio' or 'about' sections.
 
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