cambsno
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Before I can give any critique - What is your target market? That is so important to understand before any branding or design. Who is your ideal customer for example, what do you want to achieve?
Images need to be tailored to your target market - guessing that is Felixstowe docks? Why that image? If you are looking for portrait work then you need lots of portrait pics for example.
Taking a general view - the layout is not right and the copy needs work. If you dont think you are able to do this get someone who can - either for money or for a trade or favour. Good copy is essential. It also needs to be written in the right tone for that customer. For example, if you are doing baby photography you know that your target market is mums aged 20-45 ish, and to really pin it down 25-35. So ask them what they think as they are the ones that matter.
Images need to be tailored to your target market - guessing that is Felixstowe docks? Why that image? If you are looking for portrait work then you need lots of portrait pics for example.
Taking a general view - the layout is not right and the copy needs work. If you dont think you are able to do this get someone who can - either for money or for a trade or favour. Good copy is essential. It also needs to be written in the right tone for that customer. For example, if you are doing baby photography you know that your target market is mums aged 20-45 ish, and to really pin it down 25-35. So ask them what they think as they are the ones that matter.