It has been a pleasure and a privelege to be able to enjoy, ponder and write freely and in detail about such a variety of renditions of one of my photos. Thank you all. For me as for everyone else in this position, personal preference obviously plays its part in what follows; I just hope not to offend anyone along the way.
Even after a lot of looking, comparing, analysing and enjoying, I still found it difficult to pick a winner and runner-up.
Preliminaries
I resized all the images to my normal viewing size of 1100 pixels high so I could compare them on a like for like basis.
After doing my initial assessment I listened (without any hints or comments) to what my wife said about each of the images apart from Phil's which had not been posted at that point; she partly confirmed and partly challenged some of my thinking, and where challenged I went back, looked again and reconsidered.
I uploaded several differently-exposed images and together with my comment about using as many or few images as you liked this seemed to me an invitation to try various approaches, including of course HDR, as indeed it turned out. This raised a couple of issues for me about which I took decisions before seeing any of the entries.
First, there was the issue of "realism". A rendition might look "realistic", like a photo, or might look "artistic", like a work of graphic art, or somewhere on a spectrum between the two. I decided to (at least try to) not favour any particular degree of realism, but to assess each image in its own right as an example of a particular type.
Separately, there was the issue "veracity", of being "true to life". Whether or not an image was realistic or artistic, it might to a greater or lesser extent seem to capture, or completely miss, some essential quality of the scene, at least as I perceived it. I did give a hint about the nature of the day and how it looked, but I decided just to observe out of interest whether any of the renditions did capture this in some way, but not to use this as a decision criterion. If a rendition looked good to me, I would not be troubled as to whether that was how I remember seeing the scene at the time.
Establishing verticals in the image was extremely difficult. Especially with all the masts and rigging at different angles, and the fact that some of the buildings have faces which step inwards slightly as they rise, establishing verticals for the buildings that are (a) actually vertical and (b) look like they are vertical, may in fact be impossible. These odd-angles issue seemed least apparent, and perhaps entirely absent, in David's, Rhodese's and Graham's versions. In thinking beforehand about what I would look for, I did hope to see the verticality issues dealt with, but when push came to shove it turned out to be a relatively minor issue compared to issues of light, colour, artefacts, clarity and the handling (or absence) of smaller scale detail.
Two of the reworks had white borders. I normally view images on a black background, but I found the white borders distracting against a black background. I tried changing the background to white. This made the borders disappear, but made all the images look less vibrant in terms of light and colour, and significantly less pleasing. It was similar, although less so, with a grey background. I wanted to give all the images the best opportunity to "shine" at their best, especially with the quality of light being such an important aspect of the image, so I reverted to a black background.
Your renditions of the scene
Neil - Flying Giraffe
Neil's version had a strong initial visual impact for me. That broiling sky! It looks like I imagine the sky might look on another, turbulent planet.
On closer examination I noticed a number of things that detracted from my enjoyment. There seemed to be a strange unevenness to the illumination especially in the white areas on some of the buildings (on the right, and centre left – the ones with vertical whites). This didn't seem to match the light sources. The illumination around the lifeboat looked a bit strange to my eye too, as if the light level and possibly saturation inside of an oval area had been boosted, affecting not just the boat and the water around it, but also the lower parts of the building behind it.
Even at 1100 pixels high I could see artefacts in sky in the centre above the buildings, and also a ghost seagull. I saw artefacts in the near water, a bit like sharpening halos, around the nearer half of the bright area cast by the sun.
I saw vignetting in the corners, especially at the top but also visible at the bottom, that I suspected had not been introduced to achieve a visually "focusing" effect, but was rather vignetting that is in the originals and emphasised by the processing.
My overall impression was that for my taste at least it had been "overcooked", producing some side-effects of the processing that I wasn't keen on.
Darren – Proud2btaff
I found Darren's version rather appealing from a distance. From one side to the other the sky had plenty going on by way of shape, light and colour. I liked the softness of the edge of the bright area in the sky. And I liked the gull being there amongst the masts. Overall the distribution of light in the image and the muted colours seemed tocapture something of the essence of the reality, which was of light breaking into a nonetheless still rather gloomy day.
Looked at from a normal viewing distance my eyes felt a bit uncomfortable. There seemed to be a softness across much of the image, especially in the sky and some of the buildings, that made parts of it feel almost "smudged. And below the sky the darker areas seemed too near to black and a bit too featureless for my liking. (Interestingly though, as I looked at the picture for longer these smudging and blackness effects receded – brain adjusting I suppose. But after going away and coming back to it later the uncomfortable feeling returned.)
Jim - FarmerJim
I very much liked the way the lifeboat looked in Jim's version – plenty of detail and realistic colours. The level of detail and sharpness was good for all the buildings and boats.
I sensed a slightly eye-troubling contrast between the buildings on the left, which seemed clear and detailed, like the lifeboat, and the buildings on the right, which seemed to have a lower contrast, less detailed look to them. (Perhaps wrongly) I couldn't convince myself that the illumination on them would have been different enough to cause that difference in appearance. "Almost like the two halves of the image were taken on different days" was the way my wife put it. I went back and looked at the originals, and although the lightest two of them did have a softer (and somewhat over-exposed) look to the buildings on the right, it seemed to me that by a judicious use of the middle image, in which the right hand side seemed better exposed, it might well to be possible to produce a more balanced and natural appearance.
If I covered up the bright area in the sky I liked the sky- nice variety of light, colour, shapes and amounts of detail. But I had trouble "reading" the bright area. I suppose it could read as a hole in the clouds behind which there were some further away clouds that were being brightly illuminated by the sun behind them. But I had trouble convincing myself about that interpretation.
Like Darren's version, Jim's captured something of the essential feel of the moment, light in amongst the murkiness, but with more more detail and micro-contrast than Darren had achieved, and holding up much better to closer scrutiny.
The nearer sunlit water appeared to have small-scale halos like I saw in Neil's version.
David - Pookeyhead
I very much liked the way David handled the bright area in the sky, seamlessly merging it in with its surroundings. A lot of the rest of the sky was quite high key, and low on detail and micro-contrast, but not necessarily the worse for that because of the many subtle gradations of light giving texture to the clouds. I did see graininess in the sky, especially towards the left edge and above the buildings on the left.
Nice again to see the gull, in this case with the lesser contrast moving a bit more towards texture than towards silhouette as in Darren's higher contrast version of the bird.
The image generally seemed to lack a bit of the clarity and sharpness of Jim's and Josh's versions. Some detail got lost in darker areas, for example the (in this case very dark) blue hull of the lifeboat.
The degree of lightness of the much of the clouds and water took the image away a bit from the "truth" of a "gloomy day with some light breaking through" view of things. However, my wife and I came independently to the view that overall this seemed the most realistic-looking of the renditions.
Rhodese
My first reaction to Rhodese's version was "Wow, I like that!" I was reacting to the sky, which I think is beautiful in its light and colours, with the bright area handled superbly in its content and its transition to the rest of the sky. The "god rays" stand out very well even though not of huge contrast with their immediate background – presumably their colouration is helping with this.
After the initial buzz I realised that things were generally rather dark beneath the sky, with a great deal of detail being lost in the darkness.
Was this a realistic image? I think it was credible, in the sense that it might in reality have looked like that. But I don't think it captured the essence of the look of the day, in terms of light or the colour; which involved some light and subdued colours amidst a low contrast gloom. In that sense I think Jim's version (bright area apart) captured more of the essence of it, as did (albeit more "artistically" than "photographically", and when seen from a distance) Darren's version.
A couple of other thoughts.
Although the white frame was narrow, I found it distracting.
I was fascinated that Rhodese achieved this result using just one of the images.
Josh – Joshwain
When looked at closely I thought Josh's version had good clarity, detail and sharpness in the boats and buildings.
My overall impression was of an image that sat somewhat ambiguously on the spectrum between photo-realistic and slightly painterly. My brain seemed unable to settle on a way of looking at it. This feeling was enhanced by a similar right to left asymmetry in the look of the buildings as I noticed in Jim's version. The building with all the glass on the left had great clarity and ("photographic") detail, and the building to its right only appeared less so I suspect because it didn't have such large areas of glass. In contrast the buildings on the right seemed lower contrast, more muted in colour, a bit "hazy" perhaps, with more of a "painterly" feel to them.
When I first looked at Josh's version my eye was immediately drawn to the lifeboat. It seemed to stand out, much more colourful than the rest of the image. Overall, my immediate impresion was of a picture of a lifeboat, with a supporting cast of smaller boats, buildings and sky, rather than an essay on light, colour and/or shape in an interesting sky. I don't have a problem with such an interpretation (if that was what was intended), but it didn't quite work for me, I think because as I looked at it more it seemed to me that the clarity and detail of the lifeboat was more to do with a left/right split in the image rather than a particular focus on the boat. Indeed, I increasingly found my eyes drawn to the truncated building on the left, for its even greater clarity and the interest of its reflecting windows.
Unprompted by me, my wife put her hand up and covered the lifeboat and the building on the left. "I like the look of that," she said of what she could now see. And I have to agree. And interestingly (and a bit confusingly given my earlier perceptions of a "painterly" look over on the right), looked at like that the image looked quite (photo) realistic. It didn't capture the overall look of the day, but it did look very credible, especially according to my wife in the "Scandanavian" colours of some of the buildings in the distance.
Graham – overbez
From a distance I liked the look of Graham's version. Like David's version, the sky was quite high-key, but with more colour and a little more detail and micro-contrast in some areas. This was another pretty realistic-looking image, apart from the quite strong magenta hue in the bright area of the water, which I didn't feel comfortable with, and which in turn led me to notice a magenta tint in some areas of the sky. This magenta tint was very much milder than on the water, but I still didn't find it a convincing addition to the colouration.
Looking at normal viewing distance I found the amount of noise distracting. There was pronounced luminance noise in the clouds to the left and and along the top of the low building behind the lifeboat, and on the white areas of several of the boats, including the lifeboat, there was heavy and very visible chroma noise. The white areas of the large buildings on the right were also very noisy.
I found the wide white frame very distracting.
Phil - Phil-D
I very much liked the initial overall impression I got from Phil's version. The colours are not true to life, but I found them very appealing, somewhat similar to Rhodese's colours, but coupled with a more even distribution of light around the image, leaving much more detail in the darker areas and a much lighter feel to everything beneath the sky. The clarity, detail and sharpness of the boats and buildings was good, with none of the left/right imbalance of Josh's and Jim's versions.
I really liked the handling of the bright area in the sky. The God Rays were relatively weak, but I suppose that was consistent with the moderation of the lightness remaining in the bright area. The rest of the sky was low in interesting shapes, contrast and details, not helped by the large crop at the top, which took out the area of the sky with most interest in these respects.
I felt the size of the crop at the top stopped the image being a sky study, turning it into a more "intimate"/"local" image of part of the harbour. This made cropping off the front of the lifeboat particularly unfortunate. With buildings and boats truncated to the left and right, including the lifeboat, and with the sky so reduced in scope, I couldn't really find any "compositional anchorage" in the image.
There was an apparent oddity in the bottom part of the image, at least to my eye – the bright area on the water. This looked rather unlike bright and potentially dazzling reflections of sunlight hitting water. In principle this was not problematic, given the extent of the "dampening" that had been applied to the bright area of the sky. However, it looked to me as if, in the midst of water rippling in the wind, here was a still area of water reflecting trees or bushes at the edge of a lake. I had a look at the originals, and couldn't see anything like this, and also noticed that the shadow cast on that area by at least one of the masts had gone missing.
As with Rhodese, I found the achievement from a single image fascinating.
Decision time
So, after all that, who were my winner and runner-up?
Winner, Rhodese. I could wish for the darker areas to be lighter, but nonetheless I think it is a very attractive rendition of the scene.
Runner-up, David, with a nicely balanced and executed, realistic-looking rendition.
Thanks again everyone. Over to you again Rhodese.