Hi Susie... a very novel take on the theme, and I have to say I love it.
Your first shot for me is about as close to perfect as it could be. Sure, the composition and crop could be tweaked, but that wouldn't change the fact that the simple image and the lighting are both so wonderful. The lighting, in particular, is absolutely perfect. Good detail and focus on the honey itself and the fade into the black, black background is wonderful. For me, this image gets an 11 out of 10.
The second one is interesting... bees make honey by harvesting pollen from flowers and it's quite possible the pollen from this sort of flower could have been used. So I get the connection. Had you been able to make a composite with a bee in flight in the frame as well, it would have been a fun and very "together" image. Without it, it requires a bit more thought. Also not sure about the leaf which is half cropped. The sunglow I'm not fussed either way - I don't find it distracting or massively additive - it's personal preference I guess.
But going back to shot 1, totally wonderful!