Love the tones in this image, feeling like a glass or two of the red stuff myself now![]()
Great shot. Not a wine person myself but its a good shot!
Thank you - it's medicinal![]()
Cracking shot of the bottle!!
I'm unlucky in the face that alcohol is a migraine trigger, so I can't enjoy a drink often!
Converting that photo to black and white adds so much to it. Definitely prefer that one. Love the latest pic as well.

Not sure on balancing the flash with sky, it's not something I've done much of, but love the portrait & the green is right, wonder if you could add a graduated filter in PS & then draw through where the figure is?
Worth a try, as the composition, model & background are spot on.
I know it kinda defeats the object of the exercise,
But I think in that instance the fill flash has done you no favours.
I think I would have exposed off her face and tweaked the rest in photoshop (or LR in your case)
(I did have a little play but the background pixalates something terrible)
But its a cracking image though, and a lovely looking model too
I guess she takes after her mum?![]()
I really like your wine bottle & glass and the processing is great, the reflections add interest rather than distraction and, having looked very closely I do believe your wine bottle is straight! I also can't believe being so familiar with the phrase and yet having to spend to much time until I clicked what you meant by TFIF!
I really like the composition of todays and the expression is great, but this is not an area I have any experience or interest in (from 'my' side of the camera) so am not really in a position to critique.......looks good to me though!
I love portrait work but need practice especially with flash etc... your daughter is gorgeous btw
You've got a cracking little model in your daughter. When you get chance take a look at That Nikon Guy on YouTube, he has some great video tutorials on flash, fill in flash and metering for the sky etc. I've spent many an hour watching his stuff and learnt so much.
Lovely model but not sure about the flash - you can tell its been used and the light is a different direction from the daylight - maybe a bit less flash? Not sure as its something I need to work on myself - I've used it and its worked but I never make a note of what I did and by the next time I've forgotten!
Lovely composition and great model.![]()

I think that it works well, my guess would be that you could have under exposed the background a little more, to avoid the blow out in the sky and then use some digital fill to bring the background back outgreat subject to be working with out
and losts of days for more practice
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I like that Sarah. I'd like to see it a bit brighter overall though. Still, fantastic shot!
Very pretty, would make a nice greetings card.
A wonderful flower the Jasmin, great shot Sarah !!
i like the portraits of your daughters and the Jasmine flower is fab ..im not a big flower person, but this one rally appeals to me
Firstly, nice flower shot, but it looks a little pixelated. Was this a heavy crop? Irrespective of that I still quite like it.
It's a pity about 12. Good idea, but due to you overexposing the shot, and as you've mentioned, you've lost the sky so it's unrecoverable. I think if you hadn't overexposed the shot at the time you'd have probably pulled back some of that sky, especially if you're shooting in raw mode. I think that's the only thing you needed to correct here, get the exposure right in Camera and you've got much more detail in the raw file to play with and help you recover. Unfortunately, this means stopping down even more and sacrificing some depth of field.
Only other advice I can offer is (in case you're not aware of this) - if you're in manual mode, changing your aperture will always increase/decrease your exposure. But the shutter speed will not affect the flash exposure, only ambient/sun light exposure. But you've shot the above at what I believe is the max sync speed (250) so it must have been a somewhat bright day. For that reason you're unfortunate because you were always going to struggle with trying to get a shallow depth of field while using a flash. But, another option rather than using a flash is to use a reflector to try get more ambient light / sunlight on the subject. I'm sure you didn't have a reflector to hand! But might be food for thought for another day. With a reflector it's a different way to throw light on the subject and you can abandon the flash to allow for a much higher shutter speed. This way you can still light your subject and not overexpose backgrounds.
(Oh, and an after thought, another option is put a filter on the lens to help "manually" stop it down)
Takes practice, and I'm by no means an expert! But if you're like me you'll enjoy experimenting!


I do love flower shots.. Pretty one Sarah![]()
Lovely .... love the backgroundHow did you get them so perfect?
