Took the liberty to play a little with your image Sean ( happy to delete it if you wish!)
Reframed to remove the foreground and the person creeping in at the RHS
Removed the flying object in the sky ( bird presumbly)
A few more minilmal tweeks with curves may add a little more umphh to the final result but as a capture, I rather like your style.
Keeep it up
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Looking at it again, putting the couple less central will, for some work better too.
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It all depends on what pleases you personally, afterall that's presulably why you take photos.
perhaps the above edits will offer some other ideas that you may have not considered.
Either way, have fun and keep posting.