Bit of a catch up from me!
Play: Awwww - you can't go wrong with dog pictures as far as I'm concerned, but she is a real cutie. I think I prefer to sense of 'active play' in the second one, and she's definitely telling you to get on with throwing the ball and stop messing about with that silly black box!
Candid: Bang on theme - a lovely natural expression and lots of extra interest with the rear curtain flash effect. A top shot.
Produce: I love the nice warm light you've created, and the fact that the impact of the light is different in the 2 shots. Very creative.
The first one works really well, imo, but the composition loses the slightly reflective surface you'd set up. I don't honestly think that matters - it was just a comment. If I was a campaigning sort of person, I'd run a campaign for smaller name/copyright marks on photos! Although yours is subtle in colour, it's quite large and a little distracting. Sorry!
The second one: the light works beautifully here, too, and is so gentle and subtle. It sets the mood for the romantic poem. I like this composition and use of negative space - just enough, not too much. Did you by any chance take a shot from a lower angle? (I want to read the words)
Jean