I think that is probably where I went wrong, I have major major problems with lighting. Really struggling.
Just looked at your pics and they are exactly the sort of thing I am aiming for. I especially love 'Hold On', I am doing a project on Urban lines for my course and that is exactly the sort of shot I want to do. One of my other projects is sweets and I wanted to do some shots of sweets with reflections. Taken my first ones tonight on black perspex. Lighting was too harsh though. Will keep trying.