Portfolio Advice

[Fuji Dave]

Hi folks I need some advice please. This is really just a test Portfolio that I did today using the Free version of Portfoliobox of a few of my Jazz shots. Do you think it looks fine or not as like I said it is all new to me, plus I`m still trying to suss out how to write about me. Any advice or tips would be great, I don`t want to start a bussiness yet but might do if it picked up.

https://rohandave.pb.online/

 

[droj]

Well it has the merits of being nice and simple, without pretence, and of reflowing nicely according to display size, so that's a good start!

Depends where you might want to take it - if you add more pages (images, contact, prints, about) then you'll have to add a menu system / navbar into the layout.

 

[droj]

A wee bit of proof-reading - I'd knock off the 'the' from 'the great tunes', or replace it with 'their'. And I'd hyphenate 'Brighton-based'.

 

[Suvv]

I looked up the band " Amuse Manouse" and found out that they are actually called Amuse Manouche

 

[Fuji Dave]

Well it has the merits of being nice and simple, without pretence, and of reflowing nicely according to display size, so that's a good start!

Depends where you might want to take it - if you add more pages (images, contact, prints, about) then you'll have to add a menu system / navbar into the layout.

A wee bit of proof-reading - I'd knock off the 'the' from 'the great tunes', or replace it with 'their'. And I'd hyphenate 'Brighton-based'.

I looked up the band " Amuse Manouse" and found out that they are actually called Amuse Manouche

Thank you both very much, I have a lot to learn setting this up.