Please let me know your views.

I think the font for the main text is a bit too much.
It would work for menus or headings but not for a long read.
 
I'm no pro at all but I think there's too many 'ands' in the title. Agree re the font colours, made my eyes go funny. But looks very good though :)

Ed
 
Its a very easy site to use, which is good as I really dont know too much about html or css code. I just wanted something a little more personal than flickr. Will change the script text, wasnt sure myself about it.

Thanks for taking the time to comment, it really helps.....
 
The font is terrible, hard to read, and looks very dated.

when looking at images and you click on one to look at and you end up on flicker is a major put off for me.
 
I have to agree on the font - it's very difficult to read the text.
 
The graffiti pic is great but think the colours don't go too well with the logo above it.

I quite like the layout, nice, simple and a bit different. I don't mean simple in a bad way, far too many sites clutter up with pointless stuff and it's not needed, but yours has got the content level right IMO.

I'm not a fan of the font though, letters don't seem spaced apart enough and tricky to read.
 
It seems that the font is a major problem, have changed it back to a simple style and I must admit its a bit more pleasing to look at.

I have built html galleries but am finding it hard to integrate into this site as its only a drag and drop builder, im sure its possible but it will take a few more days to iron out the problems, until then clicking on an image will take you to the corresponding image in my flickr account.

Once again I apprieciate the comments as its very easy to get blinkered when doing this kind of thing.
 
You have quite a few spelling mistakes on the 'about us' page, haven't had chance to look at any others. The layout is nice, but the words don't flow very simply.

Nice design though I like it :)
 
I have changed the About text so it should read a little easier now and it is amazing how many times I read the original text and missed the two spelling mistakes,at least I hope it was just the two.
 
1. the top menu is neither centred or ranged left, sort of shunted over a bit
2. there is too much going on on the first page, hard to see what the sites about
3. actual I still don't get what the site is about is it a blog?

on the plus I like the logo.

sorry if it's a little negative it just doesn't grab me. however that is my opinion, others will love it and as long as your audience that's what matters.
 
Reduce the header images to just 1, it's frustrating to scroll that much in order to reach the actual content. It would be great if you move the hyperlinks below the header image.
 
Ok, comments have been injested and acted on, am more or less happy with the site now and thanks for the input people.
 
Did you make this yourself.Could you point me the right direction of software required as mine is crap by comparrison.
 
I believe the site was made using Weebly.com
It's a free online website creator much along the lines of blogger, wordpress etc.
 
Seeing that you own the domain fisheyeproduction.com. I would look at updating your contact infornation with an email address something like:

sales at fisheyeproduction.com

grahame.booker at fisheyeproduction.com

It looks a lot more professional that the Hotmail accounts you have listed.
 
I put the site together myself with no previous experience and the site was made using weebly which is a drag and drop website builder but allows flash animation and some other advanced features in the pro bracket.

Thanks for the email advice and I agree, something as simple as an email address can make all the difference in a sale.
 
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