Opinions needed

First line of text doesn't make sense.

It should either be this:

We are Leeds-based photographers

or this:

I am a Leeds-based photographer
 
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You've done well with Search Engine Optimisation. Is there a reason why the meta tags are visible at the bottom of the home page?

Overall:- I like the style - clean, good image placement and layout - and uncluttered too. You've done a good job.

Some minor points / suggestions for improvement....

Your company name runs off the edge of the page/frame on the Services, Offers, maternity, Video and gallery pages (I'm viewing in Firefox)

Under "Event Photography":-
"Event photography and video based in Leeds, and also covering Yorkshire, Manchester, Sheffield and all other areas of the UK." - had to read that twice, ssuggest re-wording to something like...
"Event photography and video, primarily based in Leeds and also covering Yorkshire, Manchester, Sheffield and other areas in the UK."

The following also needs looking at...
"Our photographers aim to complement your event by providing corporate event photography service to add value to your event/party and to keep your guests entertained."

"We use a very flexible, portable photography equipment which our photographer can install almost anywhere indoors."

Actually the events section has too much text - suggest either breaking up and adding titles - or making it more concise.

Maternity page:-
I would recommend moving the paragraph "It is recommended that you are at least 34 weeks..." out to the bottom entitled under somthing like "more information". It ditracts slightly from the rest of the text which is aimed at selling your service.

Testimonials:-
The text could be bigger to make it easier to read - you have plenty of room (again, could be because I'm viewing in Firefox?)

Contact page:-
in the area of the form where you have the phone numbers and "send message" button - the objects are overlapping.

Hope this helps :)
 
Typo in client quote on home page. Instead of:

"Having my Portraits shot ....

it should be:

"Having my portraits shot ....

i.e. no capital p on portraits.
 
Hi. Personally i think all those sponsor images detract. Services page the text runs out of the box. The pages dont seem to belong to the same site as they are so different in appearance. Just my thoughts.
 
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