faddius said:I swear it was linked earlier in the thread, but anyway;
OCA - The Art of Photography
OCA - Photography Degree
Hi Richard
A little feedback. Like the use of yellow with the diagonal/ curved to link the images and the curved is the stronger image.
High low, I wonder if a polarising filter may have helped on the windows of the high, but a great angle of an iconic building. I like the low, my only comment might be that I may have moved slightly to have the double yellow lines on the bottom right to balance the colours of the mural more. Did you try that with a bigger depth of field?
Curved straight is nice and on the curved you've got both elements. The curve of the track and the straightness of the trams trying to make the curve is very clever. Did you consider that as your combined? Love the straight shot from the higher angle.
Few many, love the pigeon shot, great low angle and I think the b&w approach works well.
Broad/narrow I think are your weakest pair. Not sure about the broad but the heavy narrow crop helps the narrow. There just doesn't seem to be a link between the two images?
Blunt/sharp is brilliant. Spotting the egg shape in the barbed wire was inspired, a great pairing.
Moving/still, nice lighting on the taxi, always hard with black cars but the lighting picks out the lines nicely. The bike is a great contrast.
Strong/weak not sure. I don't like the vinyetting on the statue and I'm not sure it says strong. Similarly I'm not convinced on the weak of the homeless man (but that might be as I was once involved with a homeless project and found most very strong characters)
Dark/light is a great image. Really like that.
So easy a strong set of images for the assignment. Well done.
Hi Richard
A little feedback. Like the use of yellow with the diagonal/ curved to link the images and the curved is the stronger image.
High low, I wonder if a polarising filter may have helped on the windows of the high, but a great angle of an iconic building. I like the low, my only comment might be that I may have moved slightly to have the double yellow lines on the bottom right to balance the colours of the mural more. Did you try that with a bigger depth of field?
Curved straight is nice and on the curved you've got both elements. The curve of the track and the straightness of the trams trying to make the curve is very clever. Did you consider that as your combined? Love the straight shot from the higher angle.
Few many, love the pigeon shot, great low angle and I think the b&w approach works well.
Broad/narrow I think are your weakest pair. Not sure about the broad but the heavy narrow crop helps the narrow. There just doesn't seem to be a link between the two images?
Blunt/sharp is brilliant. Spotting the egg shape in the barbed wire was inspired, a great pairing.
Moving/still, nice lighting on the taxi, always hard with black cars but the lighting picks out the lines nicely. The bike is a great contrast.
Strong/weak not sure. I don't like the vinyetting on the statue and I'm not sure it says strong. Similarly I'm not convinced on the weak of the homeless man (but that might be as I was once involved with a homeless project and found most very strong characters).
Dark/light is a great image. Really like that.
So easy a strong set of images for the assignment. Well done.
Update: Just looking at the images again on a large, colour corrected monitor rather than the iPad.
I'm loving the curvy ramp, got ideas for a car shoot
The homeless/moth organ player, I really like the movement of the people just walking past ignoring him, also the reflections in the windows add another depth. Very minor point is that the suitcase is pin sharp and the old man is just slightly off, so I tend to find my eye drawn there first. I suspect you used centre focus point, so when framing it might be an idea to use a different focus point to get the element completely in focus.
Seriously good set for the first assignment, looking forward to seeing more.
No problem at all. I learn a lot from giving feedback also. Mind you, that doesn't say I'm right, as I don't understand arty
I just know what I like and what I'd try and take after seeing your pics
I know what you mean about the dark light. Very good.
Edit - just updated my feedback at the bottom.
How are you delivering your images, prints?
Hi all,
I've been watching this thread for quite a while. Needed to get a few things sorted before committing to something new but got everything finished at the weekend and finally signed up today.
I'm ready and raring to go now and just waiting for the course to arrive so thought I'd say hello.
Hi all,
I've been watching this thread for quite a while. Needed to get a few things sorted before committing to something new but got everything finished at the weekend and finally signed up today.
I'm ready and raring to go now and just waiting for the course to arrive so thought I'd say hello.
The homeless one is good spot. Been having a few focus issues recently. Has something to do with continuous/single/auto focus. When I hold the shutter button and recompose in auto the camera thinks I'm panning and focusses centrally. Have changed it to single shot focus and will monitor it (and probably do some test shots this weekend).
I've also changed camera settings to phase detect rather than contrast AF. Do you have any preference?
I always use one shot AF unless it's something moving, such as cars, animals etc in which case I switch to AI servo. I know some like using back button for focus but I didn't feel comfortable. Didn't see a reason to change.
I use contrast detect as I can usually find a contrast edge to focus on and it's what I've got used to. As with everything, the less I have to think about, the more I can concentrate on the composition.
Furtim said:I'm going to throw my name into the hat - I started TAOP 1 last week with the OCA after dithering for many a year. Long time since I did anything formal in education, so a little daunted thus far - will just have to see how it goes.
My learning log is online at http://www.dave-thompson.org/oca-learning-log/
Welcome aboard both of you. Hopefully some of us a little ahead can help if you get stuck. Really looking forward to seeing your work.
AlfyB - did yours turn up yet?
Furtim - have you done all that in a week! That's impressive and looking very good.
Can I suggest you add a menu on the right hand side, or a link that gets you back.
Who was your poor subject walking back and forth for the panning/shutter speeds?
FrattonFreak said:I've now signed up to TAOP so I am in time to register and beat the end of May deadline.
Thanks for the advice Byker and this has now been confirmed as OK and processed accordingly but I'm told its a one-off
FrattonFreak said:Byker - I was always going to join, I just got pushed to doing soon by the price rise from June 1st. I'll buy you a pint for the suggestion though (it wont be allowed for anyone else though Im told)
Edra78 - Hi and good luck. I'll let the others confirm what software they have used so far. I would think IE9 to be plenty sufficient for TAOP though most would perhaps aspire to something like CS5. You may find however that you can get a cheap earlier used version of CS, say CS4 or CS3 (ebay/Amazon) that gives you the vast majority of what you want. Additionally when assigned your tutor perhaps raise it with them for their advice before spending any money. It may be better spent on a second hand lens etc