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Rrains2011

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Hi all not been on her for a while but I have just done some work on my site and would really like some feedback pls be open and honest...
 
Hi. I had a quick look at your site and the layout is simple which works but I am not liking the choices of images. The boy looking up is squinting and green in colour the womans face is all cut off and not particularly sharp and I dont think (IMHO) they were the shots I would have chosen - the street and street name plate were just random.

The tag line for those cherished memories I get the images just dont match. Sorry to be harsh and I dont claim to be the worlds best photographer. Photography yes, professional no.
 
I agree with the other comments - the green boy is a little offputting and the rest seem rather random.

It's also a tad offputting to see professional spelled as "proffesional"...I'd suggest you use a spell checker or get someone to proofread for you. It's so easy to miss things...!

On the plus side, the layout and navigation is nice and simple...just needs some tweaking and more consistency with the content.

Janet
 
5 tips for photographing children has numbers 1,2,3 & 5 only!!!

Your portfolio in my opinion also still requires much more work before you are at a standard to charge. Presently the website wouldn't encourage me to give you a call, it looks to me like it has been rushed through, but is much better than the previous attempt, so heading in the right direction.

Good luck
 
A little write up about your location may also help seo, I had to struggle to find where you were located.
 
Sometimes you are I, sometimes we - stick with one of these throughout.
Your packages are very odd, they seem geared at portraits, but a 4 hour shoot? Who is this aimed at? In actual fact, there is no clear aim for anything on the site.
I really think you need to assess exactly who you are marketing to, and then gear your site towards that. It definitely needs better images.

A
 
Just on the site and not the photos.

It seems a bit dull to me, grey/blue/white just make it feel a bit cold and bland to be blunt.
 
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