New to PP - would welcome your comments

[PAHammond73]

Just spent the afternoon learning how to use Lightroom. This is my first attempt, so be gentle, but I'm keen to get some C&C....

Before

After

Main changes:
Spot removal
Straighten image
Add graduate filter
Change exposure of main subject

 

[lolage]

Great first start - a definite improvement on the guy's face/clothes!