My 2013 showreel

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Hi guys

Took the advise from my previous thread and made it at short as possible without leaving too much out! Hope it gets across a good message and isn't too short?

Opinions greatly appreciated.

Thanks

 
There is absolutely nothing wrong with the footage but for me (turn the music down), there is no sense of a narrative. Apart from the bicycle (I would have loved to have seen footage of this alone, perhaps with the camera on board the bike), it just jumps from one thing to another. A nice puppy but it does not have any context in the footage.

Please more action footage, I reckon that would be a winner.
 
Really enjoyed it also. Some lovely footage in challenging conditions
 
There is absolutely nothing wrong with the footage but for me (turn the music down), there is no sense of a narrative. Apart from the bicycle (I would have loved to have seen footage of this alone, perhaps with the camera on board the bike), it just jumps from one thing to another. A nice puppy but it does not have any context in the footage.

Please more action footage, I reckon that would be a winner.

Thanks, it doesn't really have a narrative as its all of my videos into 1 basically showing my best clips! I did make a full version of the Mountain bike footage which you can find here :)


Really enjoyed it.

Really enjoyed it also. Some lovely footage in challenging conditions

Thanks guys :)
 
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