@Barney
You've done it,
https://www.talkphotography.co.uk/t...ember-entries-still-life.771697/#post-9676879 and I think you've done a pretty good job in terms of exposure - not perfect but then it isn't easy, when shooting on film.
You haven't asked for critique, and maybe I shouldn't be offering it, so just ignore me if you wish.
1. You've lit from both sides, a lot of people do that but I don't believe that it produces the best results, there is after all, as previously discussed, only 1 sun.
2. Your camera is too high. I would have lowered it to the point where the join between base and background is covered by the subject. You can't go too low without losing subject depth, but you can go quite a bit lower than you have.
3. Your subject should be right at the front of the base, this would allow better light positioning - or, if that isn't possible, use a bigger bit of wallpaper for the base . . .
Can you visulise how this would look? Most of the join would now be covered by the subject, and the bit each side that still shows would be further out of focus because there would now be more distance between subject and the join,
4. Your key light can now be placed BEHIND the subject (and off to one side because of space restrictions). Up to a point, your key light is a bit behind, but I think that more would be better. Backlighting is more challenging but also more compelling, and there would be the bonus that the vertical negative strip would be backlit and would show some detail in the images.
5. As an alternative, ditch the background completely, and bounce the light off of a white wall or similar, creating strong backlighting - a completely different look, but worth trying. This would give you far more space for positioning your light, because you could move the subject much further away from the background.
6. Your key light here is to the right, with an almost equal "fill" to the left. Fill light should, for this type of shot (most in fact) be on axis with the camera lens, not off to one side, so although a fill light would be needed if you backlit it, it would probably just need to be a bit of white paper or board, where the camera is - perhaps directly in front of the camera, with a hole cut for the lens. My guess is that this would be enough, if I'm wrong about that then a low-powered flash could be used, in the same position.
So, there you go, an unrequested critique from someone who just can't help himself
