Just Another Dude Requesting Website Crit

Hi Danny

Looks okay to me. It loads quickly, is clear and concise, no spelling or grammar errors that I could see.
The links all work and pics/slideshow do what they are meant to.
 
The only thing I'd comment on is your choice of photo on your about page. Nothing wrong with it in isolation. But, and it could just be me, is this the image you want to portray? Unless, of course, that hat is sewn to your scalp and never comes off.
 
adrianday said:
The only thing I'd comment on is your choice of photo on your about page. Nothing wrong with it in isolation. But, and it could just be me, is this the image you want to portray? Unless, of course, that hat is sewn to your scalp and never comes off.
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I noticed that, but thought this was the image he wanted to portray.
I imagined him in a suit and tie and thought 'no!'.

I'm sure Danny could find a less quirky shot :)
 
kendo1 said:
Hi Danny

Looks okay to me. It loads quickly, is clear and concise, no spelling or grammar errors that I could see.
The links all work and pics/slideshow do what they are meant to.
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adrianday said:
The only thing I'd comment on is your choice of photo on your about page. Nothing wrong with it in isolation. But, and it could just be me, is this the image you want to portray? Unless, of course, that hat is sewn to your scalp and never comes off.
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kendo1 said:
I noticed that, but thought this was the image he wanted to portray.
I imagined him in a suit and tie and thought 'no!'.

I'm sure Danny could find a less quirky shot :)
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Haha cheers guys - yeah that does get mentioned a lot (good, bad and indifferent). It was sort of a makeshift selfie and it's just kinda stuck. I'm after the informal look but I'm going to pay for a few proper headshots though as I'd hate to think that it could put anyone off booking me.
 
danny_bhoy said:
Haha cheers guys - yeah that does get mentioned a lot (good, bad and indifferent). It was sort of a makeshift selfie and it's just kinda stuck. I'm after the informal look but I'm going to pay for a few proper headshots though as I'd hate to think that it could put anyone off booking me.
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Have a word with Shaheed (Sir SR), I think his style would suit you and your website.
He's not too far from you in the grand scheme of things.
 
Looks good. Just a couple of comments - the heading 'Info' seems a bit repetitive to 'About' and doesn't really describe whats on that page. I wasn't expecting to find the package options when I clicked that link, so I'd change it to something a bit more descriptive. Maybe 'Packages' or 'Services' etc.

Also, there's a typo on the Links page ('of' is missing the 'f'): 'When you're in the process o organizing your wedding....'
 
Works well, clean layout and works nicely on mobile and full browser. Can't offer any critique, it serves it's purpose.
 
I like it, uncluttered, simple and shows off your work. Hope you get a portrait you're happy with! A candid shot of you shooting?
 
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