Um.... has anyone asked what it is yet
or me it's interesting, it's lit well and I like abstracts so as far as I am concerned it's a winner
Well, present is certainly interesting in that people dont seem to know what it is. Looks like a flashgun to me with an on/off, zoom and test buttons. I feel for you with the time and work issues... me too!
You can add me to the list of folks who have no idea what this is, John.
What intrigue!
Intrigue that adds to the shot's appeal.
I don't think the shot is rubbish at all. With the lighting experiments and the focus on the test bulb along with the use of dof, I think this makes for a very accomplished shot.
Your pano version of speed is very nice
no idea what your present was?? Were you naughty at Christmas?
Its not rubbish as it has everyone intrigued. Its not as good as your other photos though.I'm looking forward to seeing your 'people' shot.
You have got everybody guessing so it must be good
It's a very effective shot, B&W, lighting, DOF all work together and we all want to know what it is
nice pictures of a thingy-ma-bob
Well, I haven't a clue what it is either but I like the shot and the processing - it reminds me of some of the old photos of WWII mechanical/electrical wizardry...
interesting subject, whatever it is think we'll all be checking back to see if you reveal all..
not looking forward to week 7 either
Without reading what everyone else has said (as there are far too many to read!), here is my 2 pennies worth:
Wk 1 - cool shot, very similar to an ad once I saw for some tyre manufacturer I think
Wk2 - love the clock shot and the poem
Wk3 - Definitely prefer the colour version as the mono looks a tad dark
Wk4 - love the angle of the first image - definitely very street!
Wk5 - i've tried that shot and failed, but seems like you nailed it
Wk6 - Interesting present and an interesting shot
I like the Present picture John, and like others have said, it isn't rubbish at all ... it's got us all thinking anyway! I think it's the intrigue that makes this an effective picture
I have no idea what it is either!
Hi John,
I appreciate the lack of time issue. I'm suffering with it this week too, but I do have an idea now. All I need to do is find half an hour from somewhere...
Anyway, it's not a bad shot at all. Good depth of field and composition as others have said, and I do find myself looking at it and wondering what the hell it is. Keep us all guessing!
Ian.
Well I'm glad I didn't jump in with suggestion as to what it is I'd of been way off.I thought it was some old fashioned kit hence the B&W grainy effect.I know how you feel when you think you haven't done it justice. We just have to move on and hope we can get the mojo back for the next theme...Mick

Great shots, and whats good to see is that you have learned 4 points, all of which can be built on!![]()
If you're worried about noise b&w works a treat. First one's a tricky one to frame with them being on different levels so that second works much better for me. Leaves a little intrigue about what they're looking at and doing. A b&w conversion will also help sort out those walls. I'm sure you've learnt a lot from the exercise and be nice to see some pics from the production (which will really test your low light skills).
I've just been doing stuff like your 'people' shots recently for a charity do - they're really not easy!
You've done good though - can't really offer any constructive advice except to just keep at it![]()
Looks to me John you have captured exactly what you wanted to, and well, their expressions, and also learnt a great deal along the way. Keep at it.
Me thinks! The lady to the right smelt it, one to the left denied it and the one sitting down supplied it.

Aye that 50mm is a handy little lens.
Good advice from Darren above. I also prefer the second of your shots, but mainly because it's a bit sharper. Shooting wide open at 1.8 means bad news if you miss your focus point.
Composition, considering you have to move your feet with a 50, is very good in that second shot.
Nice expressions as well and everyone looks happy.
Ian.
The second of your people shots is the one for me. The composition and detail stand out more than the first one
You are braver then me though. I still only mange to take family and close friend shots. Don't feel confident enough yet to try others who I don't really know.
Cheers, Rob
I like the first one - I like the expression on the girl in the grey cardi.
Thanks very much Ian, I learnt a lot about DOF too, I was quite surprised to see that on a few, focusing on the person in the fore left the person behind much more in focus than when focusing on the one behind, the person in the fore was much more OOF (I kind of understood that, but there's nothing like practical application)
Well, present is certainly interesting in that people dont seem to know what it is. Looks like a flashgun to me with an on/off, zoom and test buttons.
I've never pretended that this lighting stuff is anything but a mystery to me!never tried a 'nifty fifty' sounds like a great lens.. prefer the second shot, nice that the lady in front is the main forcus and good DOF on the lady behind..![]()
catch up week 6 and 7,
Week 6 your flashgun (present) is not as bad as you think suits B&W with good DOF I know what you mean about the light on the front of the flash unit (i think).
Week 7 (people) not a lot of people liked this subject as a lot of people have to go out of their comfort zone you have captured your subjects well, the second picture is better framed than the firstnot sure about the lighting in the shot was the white balance set for the indoor lights? as there seems to be a slight yellow cast on the picture or maybe my monitor needs calibrating
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Full marks for bravery on this one, John. I've done some shooting for theatre productions and I find I really need to know what's happening in terms of actors moving around the stage (or school hall!), expressions, pauses etc to get the shots I or the producer want. Are you going to do a whole cast photo at the dress rehearsal? And the backstage crew? Will the dress rehearsal include lighting, etc? I'm not trying to scare you, but forewarned is forearmed and it's great fun - I'm sure you'll enjoy it. The producer's often got ideas of which scenes he or she would like pics of.
Anyway, on to your photos - in the first one you've caught great expressions, and using a low pov has made the best of a difficult grouping. I'd love to know what the lady on the left was saying! It's an ecellent 'scene from the play' shot.
I like the second one better from a photographic point of view, the dof works really well since the lady on the left is clearly the subject but the actor on the right is still identifiable. Nicely judged.
There've been some interesting disucssions about dof fairly recently, but I've had a quick look round and can't find the thread I was thinking of. But working quickly in this sort of situation, I find the 'third in front, 2 thirds behind in focus' is fine.
Best of luck - although these look good and I'm sure you won't actually need luck!
Jean
I've never pretended that this lighting stuff is anything but a mystery to me!
Second one for me John. I think the DoF is spot on, great expressions and you've done really well with the lighting limitations . . . I'd love to know what's going on in the first one though!
As much as I hate shooting people, I'm kind of hoping for a theme that will let us see some of your dress rehearsal shots in the next few weeks.
The second picture works best for me John, well done![]()


OOOoooo! I like this shot a lot!
The angle and lighting, dof the subject itself, the shadows and the moving part all work together.
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I cannot believe I have not been in here before John - a thousand apologies
Having said that then, here we go!
Curves - Nicely taken but for me, either too much or not enough black... seems a little off balance.
Poetry - I like it, I think you hit the xray idea nicely.
Chopped - Hmm. As you say, not what you wanted... it is chopped though and technically it's cool!
Street - First one for me, second does nothing at all while the first pulls you up and in at the same time.
Speed - an excellent pan, as you say the wee blur adds rather than detracts. Not sure on the crop, I think I prefer it though!
Present - Hmm - for the record no, I would not have guessed the flash, but for me it's just a pic... sorry
People - Number two definitely for me... the first has no central point with all three looking in different directions - number two is much more concise and intent.
Mechanical - full circle to week one! Having said that, this one is very good - I do like the interest point and composition/viewpoint.
Arthur
Some great shots I particuarly like your 'Street' shot and this one![]()


People - the first is fun with such different expressions but I think the second is the better shot. I look forward to seeing some of the rehearsal shots - it sound hard to do but fun, and I bet you will learn a lot by having a go.
Mechanical - I love this! The DOF may be small but works really well, and the blur of the thingy (?balance wheel?) is brilliant.![]()
Mechanical - great detail, really nice shot.
