Ian's 52: Week 21: Isolation (pg 12)

Three nice shots (I love the B&W) but its the first for me - #2 looks a little too frenetic :)

And I prefer guitars to joannas so its #1 for me!

#1 says fretting speed for me as your left hand is prominent and moving fast!

Very nice!

And your narrative is also very good :)
 
hi Ian, 10/10 for the effort, despite being a harsh critic on yourself i think the first image has achieved the brief perfectly, it certainly conveys speed. thanks for the essay on the session and settings, it makes a great read, we are all putting in effort, blood sweat and tears into the 52's so its nice to read on the thought that goes into other members projects.
 
Nice shots, No 3 my fav.
Like the grain and B&W coversion.
Main thing is were all learning. I too am finding the 52 hard but enjoying it when i get tround to it each week.
Your tennage daughter sounds like she makes your photography, dito, i have 2 daughters, 3 and 6, so just has hard but on the other end of spectrum LOL.
 
Three nice shots (I love the B&W) but its the first for me - #2 looks a little too frenetic :)
And I prefer guitars to joannas so its #1 for me!
#1 says fretting speed for me as your left hand is prominent and moving fast!
Very nice!
And your narrative is also very good :)

Thanks John. As someone who's only average on the guitar, I prefer to hear my wife play expertly!

hi Ian, 10/10 for the effort, despite being a harsh critic on yourself i think the first image has achieved the brief perfectly, it certainly conveys speed. thanks for the essay on the session and settings, it makes a great read, we are all putting in effort, blood sweat and tears into the 52's so its nice to read on the thought that goes into other members projects.

It's funny. The effort other people are putting into this kind of spurs me on. Thanks for you words.

Nice shots, No 3 my fav.
Like the grain and B&W coversion.
Main thing is were all learning. I too am finding the 52 hard but enjoying it when i get tround to it each week.
Your tennage daughter sounds like she makes your photography, dito, i have 2 daughters, 3 and 6, so just has hard but on the other end of spectrum LOL.

Apparently it's only the first 18 years that are the worst. I'd pay good money to have mine go back to being 3 & 6. I could educate them properly in music, and movies, and NEVER EVER buy a mobile phone for them. The worst part is when you begin to start talking like your parents. You then realise how old you are.

I like these Ian. They are a really good take on the theme. Number 1 is my favourite and I really appreciate your descriptions about how they are done.
Jenny

Thanks Jenny!

Ian.
 
Like your week five photos Ian, I can only agree with what has been said above by Dark Star.
 
Don't be so hard on yourself, all 3 are great. Personal fave is #2 lovely 'texture' to the image.
 
:clap: Brilliant idea this week Ian.
And you've put a massive amount of effort into it. It's seeing how much thought people like you are putting in week after week that's kept me from a couple of filler shots already :thumbs:

Of the 3, I definitely prefer your first shot.
You say it doesn't look very fast, but "slow" is a speed too so it didn't have to be super fast to meet the theme!
I think you have just the right amount of motion blur in this one - in the other two it's just a bit OTT, you're losing too much definition in the hands for my taste.

I like the black fleece for the background too. It adds a bit more depth than the grey in version 2.
 
Great images - my fav is the second one, showing the frantic shifting up and down the fingerboard. If the background wall were just a bit darker your right arm would stand out a bit more, but it is a good effect even so and I love the gritty texture. :thumbs:
 
3 good attempts to show speed, all three have different plus points but no.2 stands out for me. :thumbs:
 
Excellent idea Ian... I prefer the first of the three. There's clearly movement and it looks speedy, but there's also plenty else sharp enough too. I think the second has too much motion in all of it. The piano is good, but I think again, a little too much motion in the hands for my tastes.
 
Like your week five photos Ian, I can only agree with what has been said above by Dark Star.

Don't be so hard on yourself, all 3 are great. Personal fave is #2 lovely 'texture' to the image.

Great interpritation of the theme i like the second one best

great image, you just mind them fingures

like your interpretation of speed. I think #1 is my favourite.

Thankyou all for your kind words...

:clap: Brilliant idea this week Ian.
And you've put a massive amount of effort into it. It's seeing how much thought people like you are putting in week after week that's kept me from a couple of filler shots already :thumbs:

Of the 3, I definitely prefer your first shot.
You say it doesn't look very fast, but "slow" is a speed too so it didn't have to be super fast to meet the theme!
I think you have just the right amount of motion blur in this one - in the other two it's just a bit OTT, you're losing too much definition in the hands for my taste.

I like the black fleece for the background too. It adds a bit more depth than the grey in version 2.

I tend to agree with you an all of that Sarah.

Great images - my fav is the second one, showing the frantic shifting up and down the fingerboard. If the background wall were just a bit darker your right arm would stand out a bit more, but it is a good effect even so and I love the gritty texture. :thumbs:

3 good attempts to show speed, all three have different plus points but no.2 stands out for me. :thumbs:

And a couple of votes for the second one. I'm thinking it's actually useful to get feedback on more than one shot. Thanks guys.

Excellent idea Ian... I prefer the first of the three. There's clearly movement and it looks speedy, but there's also plenty else sharp enough too. I think the second has too much motion in all of it. The piano is good, but I think again, a little too much motion in the hands for my tastes.

Thanks John. Appreciate the feedback.

Week 6 to post in a minute, then I can get around to looking at other people's stuff which is fast becoming just as much use as actually taking the shots!

Ian.
 
Week 6: Present

I had a lot of ideas this week. It's a great subject, and to be honest, I've spent more time thinking than shooting! However with a busy weekend coming up, and a training course for most of next week to prep for, time is limited at the moment.

So. "Present". Yep. Has many different meanings, but this weeks photo means all of these things all at once.

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This is my wife. We've been through a lot together, and are still going through a lot, but this photo is her doing something just for me. Posing :). I know she's not a fan of sitting for me, she doesn't like much about herself no matter what I say, but I love her very much.

In some ways I feel as though this relationship is a real gift. I often tell her that she's helped me see the world in colour instead of shades of grey. I feel very lucky.

Also, on another note, she has changed a lot physically over the past couple of years. Age catches up with us all I know, and she's rarely happy with the way she looks. I have so many photos over the years, and in each shot she looks different. So for me, this is a recording of the "present". The now. I know in a few months, things will have changed again.

I see every shot taken with a camera as a recording of the present. This subject could be taken of anything to be honest, and it would still be valid. I'm not sure even a crowbar is needed. The most important thing for me in my "present" though is my wife, and I'm glad I took this shot...

Techy stuff:
Annie on the sofa, arm resting on the arm. Taken @50mm, 1/200sec, f2.8, ISO 100.
Off camera EX430 triggered remotely (eBay radio trigger) and fired back at the (white) wall @ 1/8 power to try and bounce the light.
Processed in CS3.
- Levels selectively applied to brighten the RH side of the face.
- Curves to increase general contrast
- Upped the saturation a bit in preparation for a B&W conversion
- Selective sharpening and whitening of the eyes. (would appreciate comments around whether this is too much. I think it is, but others think not)
- B&W conversion using the channel mixer.
- Resisted the temptation to gaussian blur backgrouond for soft focus effect. Glad I did.

Lessons Learned:
This was one of many shots taken. The first series, I had Annie sat on a chair against a white wall. I think I took over 40 shots and didn't like a single one. It was only when we went into the lounge that I started being happy with the more relaxed shots on the sofa. I'm not confident about a sitting subject and need to read up on that I think.
With the shot itself, there was one other shot I preferred, but I focussed the 50 on her fringe and not the eyes. Missing the focus spoiled the shot and I did kick myself afterwards. Getting spot on focus is by far my biggest problem in portraiture. Focussing in low light was difficult (was OK when the flash went off).
I could have upped the aperture to f8/f10 but I think I'd have still missed the eyes, and would have had to up the ISO to compensate, picking up undesirable noise.
I've also blown the highlights a little on the LH side of the face. Getting the same shot with a different angle to the flash would have helped. Additionally, I could have upped the aperture to f8/f10 to cut the light. This would have helped with focussing too.

I do like this portraiture stuff. However it's a bit of a faff for me, and the patience of my subjects is always in the forefront of my mind. Practice will make perfect though, and I'm not aiming to be a professional, so I'm happy with the results.

Comments and critique always welcome. Off to have a look at some of the other 52's now!

Ian.
 
Ian, that is a really super portrait and a wonderful take on the present subject.

Sounds like you really worked hard for this shot but it works wonderfully. And for reference, I have seen many "so called" pro portrait shots that are nowhere near as good as that.

Really well done.

Cheers, Rob
 
Very professional looking shot. If you hadn't said that this was taken on a sofa with nothing but an off camera flash i'd have never known. I'd be proud of that shot :)
 
Ian, that is a really super portrait and a wonderful take on the present subject.
Sounds like you really worked hard for this shot but it works wonderfully. And for reference, I have seen many "so called" pro portrait shots that are nowhere near as good as that.
Really well done.
Cheers, Rob

Wow. Kind words. Thanks Rob.

Very professional looking shot. If you hadn't said that this was taken on a sofa with nothing but an off camera flash i'd have never known. I'd be proud of that shot :)

And more kind words. Cheers Rich.

Hi Ian,
(makes me wanna go hug my wife)
cheers
chris

Do it. You never know what's coming round the corner. Thanks for your kind words too Chris.

Much appreciated all.

Ian.
 
Wow, that is a really lovely shot. No, you have not over done the eyes. They really jump out and make the picture. Wonderful.

I really like your explanations of the reasons behind the shot (very moving) and the technical detail.

Taking photos is a really good way of recording the "present" and great to look back on in years to come.

Well done.

Jenny
 
I like your image too Ian. Your wifes eyes draw the viewer in, a good capture of a lovely subject, thanks for sharing the image and your thoughts behind it.
Iain
 
Lovely portrait brought to life by the great accompanying thoughts - thanks for sharing.

Phil
 
Ian that's a special shot and a real nice image. I love the introduction to the shot and the emotion behind it, now go and tell your wife she looks beautiful.

I do that every day, but thanks for the comments.

Wow, that is a really lovely shot. No, you have not over done the eyes. They really jump out and make the picture. Wonderful.
I really like your explanations of the reasons behind the shot (very moving) and the technical detail.
Taking photos is a really good way of recording the "present" and great to look back on in years to come.
Well done.

Jenny

I'm glad you don't think they're over done. It's now 2:1 in favour of leaving it as it is. Thanks Jenny.

I like your image too Ian. Your wifes eyes draw the viewer in, a good capture of a lovely subject, thanks for sharing the image and your thoughts behind it.
Iain

Lovely portrait brought to life by the great accompanying thoughts - thanks for sharing.
Phil

Thanks guys.

Ian.
 
Ian, you have made a fantastic start to your project. There is obviously a lot of musical talent in your house and substantial photography skills. If your wife doesn't believe you go tell her I said she's beautiful too:thumbs:
 
Very cool shot, your wife is very pretty, good bone structure with eyes that really draw you in!

Thats very cool you keep chickens, I've always wanted to!
 
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really good pictures so far!! present is a fantastic portrait
 
Excellent portrait shot :clap: with a lot of info to back it up.

:thumbs:
 
A wonderful portrait :clap::clap: and very fitting for the theme (and i think you have the eyes just right).
 
That's my favourite shot for "present" so far this week :)

The story behind it is beautiful and sets the scene, but the image is definitely strong enough to stand on its own without explanation.

Portraits are not really my thing, so I'm not qualified to offer much technical C&C other than to say that I really, really like it and then try to explain why.
The pose looks really relaxed and not staged at all and the B&W conversion is spot on. I don't think that you've overdone the eyes at all - in fact they look stunning.

I hope you let your wife see your post this week - I'm sure it would be a gift for her to read your reasoning for this shot.
 
Well done Ian. A lovely shot, spot on theme in so many different ways.
 
really like this, and having just tried to do something like this and realising how hard it is, can see what a good job you have made of it

top stuff :thumbs:
 
Fantastic portrait of a fantastic looking lady. You should both be very happy with this shot :clap:
 
Ian, you have made a fantastic start to your project. There is obviously a lot of musical talent in your house and substantial photography skills. If your wife doesn't believe you go tell her I said she's beautiful too:thumbs:

Thanks for your kind words. Much appreciated.

Very cool shot, your wife is very pretty, good bone structure with eyes that really draw you in!
Thats very cool you keep chickens, I've always wanted to!

Keep the chickens. You'll not regret it. Best eggs ever!

great photo m8

really good pictures so far!! present is a fantastic portrait

Hi :wave:
I like your speed pic - it's a very refreshing idea, and well executed :clap:
Also - your portrait present is very nicely done, and I'm sure the Mrs is very pleased with it :)

Excellent portrait shot :clap: with a lot of info to back it up.
:thumbs:

lovely shot and with the story fits the theme very nicely .. no crowbar required

Thanks folks.

A wonderful portrait :clap::clap: and very fitting for the theme (and i think you have the eyes just right).

Another +1 for the eyes. I guess it's just me then!

That's my favourite shot for "present" so far this week :)
The story behind it is beautiful and sets the scene, but the image is definitely strong enough to stand on its own without explanation.
Portraits are not really my thing, so I'm not qualified to offer much technical C&C other than to say that I really, really like it and then try to explain why.
The pose looks really relaxed and not staged at all and the B&W conversion is spot on. I don't think that you've overdone the eyes at all - in fact they look stunning.

I hope you let your wife see your post this week - I'm sure it would be a gift for her to read your reasoning for this shot.

Thanks Sarah. Praise indeed, and more kind words. I've not shown her the post, or the comments yet, but I will, I promise.

Well done Ian. A lovely shot, spot on theme in so many different ways.

really like this, and having just tried to do something like this and realising how hard it is, can see what a good job you have made of it
top stuff :thumbs:

Fantastic portrait of a fantastic looking lady. You should both be very happy with this shot :clap:

great shot and very brave of your wife, look forward to seeing more of your work, your story only adds to the shot ;)

Again, thank you all for your words. Hard to respond when there's no criticism.

I'm struggling with this week to be honest, as I'm on a course from 6 'til 6 and things are fairly hectic. Might be a joker week...

Ian.
 
Week 7: People

Urgh!

I've been on a training course most of the week, and what was left was spent catching up with work that piled up while I was away. (Oh the glory of being on a team of 1) so this was a tough week. I didn't want to take my camera into Dodgy Central in Manchester, so I've pulled out the crowbar this week.

People... i.e. how can I fit photos into the subject with a limited resource.

Listening to the iPod though on the train, did give me a little inspiration though. Can't remember the song now, but I remember the line was something along the lines of the fact that we are really just made up of the sum of other people. Parents, friends, relatives... All contribute to who we are.

Also, on the back of this, I've run out of willing human subjects at home, so all I was left with was me.

And here I am...

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Exposure set to f8, ISO100, 1/200 sec. 430EX at arms length just inside my peripheral vision triggered with an eBay remote.

Initially, I focussed on my guitar headstock as a pointer, then switched to manual focus hoping I could kneel in just about the right place. I dialled down the power on my 430EXII to 1/16 and spent about an hour messing about with holding it at different angles and different distances. I now have a new respect for those folks doing a self-portrait 365 or 52. I deliberately wanted my face in shadow, so I held the flashgun just inside my peripheral vision to get the cross-flash moody look. I'm a grumpy b****r you see.

Out of around 20 shots (by which time my knees were broken from getting up, fire camera on timer, run back, kneel down, fail to look cool, rinse, repeat ad nauseum) I had just 2 I liked. Two. :(

So then I decided to have a bit more fun drawing people with a maglite.

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ISO100, f29, 30sec exposure.

I don't know why I do this to myself. More running about.

I also fail at art. Bigtime. I cannot write backwards either.

It made me smile when I finished it though. Having to work on a 30sec timer didn't help. I was all a bit rushed. That's the problem with not having a proper remote trigger for the camera.

Handy tip for drawing stick adults: Use yourself as a guide. I stood and held the torch, pretty much tracing my own leg/body/head proportions, jumping to the right to draw the woman. The child was a bit of a nightmare and I forgot the eyes, but this was attempt 15 and I was exhausted from running back and forwards. "Family" was a separate 30 sec exposure and just comped on in Photoshop.

Anyway, that's me for another week. Please lets have a nice easy Week 8! Please?

Ian.
 
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