Here we go again! another year and another website.

[sparkoe]

As always, each year I like to redesign a new website and hopefully as years goes by - I'm hopefully getting better at designing.

Now, my punctuation and spelling is not the best and I am hoping a few people can cast their eyes over my website and check for any errors.

For those of you who are just as bad as me, please feel free to give me a few ideas on how to improve the look of my new website.

Please visit the site at: http://bespokepackages.wix.com/the-one

It has been designed with Wix, but to be honest I've never had any problems with them or with Google listings.

Also the website has not been publish under my domain name just yet so It's not a live website. Current website is: www.sparkesphotography.co.uk

Thank you for taking a look.

Many Thanks
Glenn

 

[sparkoe]

Oh, and there's a few more pictures to be uploaded as well - just to balance the galleries out.

Thanks
Glenn

 

[Harlequin565]

Starter for ten...

Venues heading "photographer's point of view, maybe very helpful" should be "may be" - 2 separate words.

Morning Preparations heading "needs to be planed as well" should be "planned" (2xn) All appearances of Preperation need to have their errant e dealt with - including drop down menu headings (under Galleries)

Home page spelling error "DOCUMENTRY STYLE" should be Documentary.

Having had a brief browse through some of the sub pages, I would advise you to get (i.e. pay for) a proof reader to go through this, or find a good friend who is great at spelling and grammar as it looks like this is not a strong point for you. You can then concentrate on your Photography (which is your strong point) and let the English experts worry about your grammar.

 

[sparkoe]

That's great, thank you for having a look through. I did do a few corrections last night but you have picked up on a few different mistakes that I didn't know about, so thank you very much for that.