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Ok being hyper critical. Personally I don't like the stickers on the back window, I'd either replace the colour in them or more lightly remove them altogether, but it's nit picking, otherwise it's a very good job.
 
Yup... very good job. The only thing I can see that could improve it is to make the reflections on the car look like they have been lit with a lightbox. Not sure how easy or difficult that would be mind you...

BTW: I like the stickers :)
 
I was thinking about the reflections too, but if you remove/alter too much of the car, you risk losing the original vehicle.
 
thanks guys going to try get rid of the reflections they are annoying me now lol
 
A very clean job you have made of it, but it would appear that you have lost some of the colour in the mini.
Maybe a wee saturation boost in the reds would help.

*unless of course the muted colours were your intention*
 
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regarding the reflections, would it help to take the pictures on a cloudy day?
 
Yer would have helped to done it on a cloudy day but my uni crit was only a week later and it took me time to get the color film developed and scanned and for the final crit I did boost the saturation thanks looking back it seems a bit blue ish but I wanted to keep a classic look rather than taking it too far and over saturated, thanks for all comments :)
 
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