WillWow!!
Not even going to bite.
Please don’t ever again reply to my threads
@DemiLion - I normally find you quite abrupt in your replies sometimes, but in this case I have to agree with you. I'm not sure the OP has taken any of the advice in that has been said to him.
I've read a few posts from the OP and all seem to be along the same lines. I know lots of people say it's not about which gear you are using, but you DO need to know how to use the camera and how the setting you chose are going to effect the exposure and how the photo will look after you press the shutter button.
Will
If this was Marks response to your first post here, I’d agree with you, it’d be rude.
But so far this is the 4th time you’ve asked why you struggle to focus.
You’ve had the answer, repeatedly, slowly, on the forum and by PM.
You’re making ‘the simple stuff’ look so complicated that Marks exasperation is totally justified.
Try this as a way forward...
Stop volunteering ‘for jobs’ or telling people you’re available for them, and especially describing your photos as ’jobs’ whilst you’re asking for very basic help from pro photographers.
Read all the advice you’ve already been given about how focus works.
If you don’t understand that advice, ask again!
Practice
Read all the advice you’ve already been given about how focus works.
If you don’t understand that advice, ask again!
Practice
Practice some more
Read all the advice you’ve already been given about how Focus works.
If you don’t understand that advice, ask again!
Practice.
Practice some more
Practice some more
Practice some more
When you’ve nailed ‘the simple stuff’, it’ll hopefully have dawned on you that there’s a bit of complicated stuff to learn too before you can think about taking on a ‘job’.
Come back and ask questions about the complicated stuff![]()
Please don’t ever again reply to my threads
Wow!!
Not even going to bite.
Please don’t ever again reply to my threads
Canon 70D
Sigma 18-35mm 1.8
Speedlite YN568E 111
Hi guys,
So I went out this weekend and took some pictures for my friends.
1st shoot was for a friends 50th birthday and the other was for a friends opening of her salon, drinks etc.
Both of my friends were really happy with the pictures. Even tho you guys might not think they are good. I am a beginner and still a lot to learn, and I know that. Here are links to the pictures.
50th Birthday Party - https://www.dropbox.com/sh/2skcw7hlfkw592m/AAAY1pCXt3HMuvAKdLn05ea6a?dl=0\
Salon opening night - https://www.dropbox.com/sh/gnq9wjbe98ghu9b/AAAxsDPu06EA1lwnWx3MCJWEa?dl=0
I was really nervous about the 50th birthday as I knew it would be low light and a lot of people there. But after I got going I was ok.
But I was struggling, mainly with focusing. Sometimes it would just not focus on the people. I don’t know if you guys can answer. But I have a feeling my single focus point may not of been on the subject?
As you can see from this pic the girls aren't in focus one bit, but the background is. I would of tried to have the single focus point on the girls head, is that right?
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Would you put the point on the girl on the rights head?
At some point I couldn’t even focus the lens on the subject, this was prob because it was too dark? Because I moved them into better light and it worked ok.
I had the flash pointing up to the ceiling the whole time. It was fairly high, but was white. What happens if I direct the flash on the subjects face? Is that a no go?
Towards the end of the night my ISO was at 6000 and when I uploaded them to light room they were grainy, but that would be because of my ISO?
I kept my F Stop on 1.8 most of the night.
In regard to this one....................I agree about the flash recycle time as mentioned by @andrewcCanon 70D
Sigma 18-35mm 1.8
Speedlite YN568E 111
Hi guys,
In regards to the salon, it was so much brighter so it was better.
But some pics came out like this (as if the flash didn’t go off, but it did)
As you can see here, they are in focus
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But god knows what happened here?
![]()
I hope that all makes sense.
Hopefully I can get some answers and I can take them away with me to improve.
Thanks
A simple technique for making sure stuff is in focus: like Dave said, use the centre focus point. Before each shot stick it over the bit you want in focus and half-press the shutter button to lock it, then swing the camera away to re-compose the image how you want it. Practice doing it for EVERY shot. It's not necessarily the *best* technique, but it will reduce the OOF failures.
It seems the ‘technical bit’ is still alluding the OP![]()
I`m off to bed now, but I will make you a deal. If you take on the advice and use it how members have said then share the good photos from it and I will Give you something for FREE that WILL also help you in your photography journey.

A nice and generous offer.......................so @willkia not only will practice make perfect but be rewarded to boot
I look forward to seeing the improvement very soon![]()
Will
If this was Marks response to your first post here, I’d agree with you, it’d be rude.
But so far this is the 4th time you’ve asked why you struggle to focus.
You’ve had the answer, repeatedly, slowly, on the forum and by PM.
You’re making ‘the simple stuff’ look so complicated that Marks exasperation is totally justified.
Try this as a way forward...
Stop volunteering ‘for jobs’ or telling people you’re available for them, and especially describing your photos as ’jobs’ whilst you’re asking for very basic help from pro photographers.
Read all the advice you’ve already been given about how focus works.
If you don’t understand that advice, ask again!
Practice
Read all the advice you’ve already been given about how focus works.
If you don’t understand that advice, ask again!
Practice
Practice some more
Read all the advice you’ve already been given about how Focus works.
If you don’t understand that advice, ask again!
Practice.
Practice some more
Practice some more
Practice some more
When you’ve nailed ‘the simple stuff’, it’ll hopefully have dawned on you that there’s a bit of complicated stuff to learn too before you can think about taking on a ‘job’.
Come back and ask questions about the complicated stuff![]()
The advice on these forums from @Phil V is always good - he has told me I'm a w****r on numerous occasions (usually I deserve it!) so he doesn't mince his words but he is definitely worth listening to!
Look at his website and you will see how good the guy really is with a camera and how you should respect & listen to the advice he offers - he is offering the advice FOC on here so be very grateful
https://www.philipvaughanphotography.com/
Canon 70D
Sigma 18-35mm 1.8
Speedlite YN568E 111
Hi guys,
So I went out this weekend and took some pictures for my friends.
1st shoot was for a friends 50th birthday and the other was for a friends opening of her salon, drinks etc.
Both of my friends were really happy with the pictures. Even tho you guys might not think they are good. I am a beginner and still a lot to learn, and I know that. Here are links to the pictures.
50th Birthday Party - https://www.dropbox.com/sh/2skcw7hlfkw592m/AAAY1pCXt3HMuvAKdLn05ea6a?dl=0\
Salon opening night - https://www.dropbox.com/sh/gnq9wjbe98ghu9b/AAAxsDPu06EA1lwnWx3MCJWEa?dl=0
I was really nervous about the 50th birthday as I knew it would be low light and a lot of people there. But after I got going I was ok.
But I was struggling, mainly with focusing. Sometimes it would just not focus on the people. I don’t know if you guys can answer. But I have a feeling my single focus point may not of been on the subject?
As you can see from this pic the girls aren't in focus one bit, but the background is. I would of tried to have the single focus point on the girls head, is that right?
![]()
![]()
Would you put the point on the girl on the rights head?
At some point I couldn’t even focus the lens on the subject, this was prob because it was too dark? Because I moved them into better light and it worked ok.
I had the flash pointing up to the ceiling the whole time. It was fairly high, but was white. What happens if I direct the flash on the subjects face? Is that a no go?
Towards the end of the night my ISO was at 6000 and when I uploaded them to light room they were grainy, but that would be because of my ISO?
I kept my F Stop on 1.8 most of the night.
In regards to the salon, it was so much brighter so it was better.
But some pics came out like this (as if the flash didn’t go off, but it did)
As you can see here, they are in focus
![]()
But god knows what happened here?
![]()
I hope that all makes sense.
Hopefully I can get some answers and I can take them away with me to improve.
Thanks
Thanks Fraser
But that’s not me
My website came down a very short while ago.
Philip is s rather different kind of photographer to me. But not as big as the distance between Doncaster & Ripon.
Thanks for the laugh, very good!Wow!!
Not even going to bite.
Please don’t ever again reply to my threads
Lets hope that @willkia will take on the advice and share some good shots that folk will like and say it`s better. Then he can have a choice of what photo editing software I give him.
Erm, I'd be a little bit careful about that. Licences are generally personal.
General Data protection regulations will be an issue have you got it covered?
Do you know what is required?
I have not a clue at all.
I have looked at it and am thankful that I am well retired.
But it effects all professional people and event photagraphy.
If you want to be scared look up GDPR+photography.
There are some incredibly 'anal' responses to a very kind gesture TBH.
Erm, I'd be a little bit careful about that. Licences are generally personal.
I`d get in contact with Adobe and Coral to tell them the new owner, but only if Will makes a big improvement.
General Data protection regulations will be an issue have you got it covered?
Do you know what is required?
I have not a clue at all.
I have looked at it and am thankful that I am well retired.
But it effects all professional people and event photagraphy.
If you want to be scared look up GDPR+photography.
I take copyright as a fairly serious issue. It's called trying to avoid hypocrisy.
I think Dave is talking about giving his licensed software to Wil.I take copyright as a fairly serious issue. It's called trying to avoid hypocrisy.
I've read all of the posts above, some of them do seem to be harsh - but in my view they aren't, simply because you are setting yourself out to be a professional photographer, from whom high standards of competence are expected. If you had posted a similar question elsewhere - beginners perhaps - and asked how to set the basic functions on your camera then people would have been polite and encouraging.
Now, from your viewpoint, you probably see yourself as an amateur who is keen to improve, and no doubt you're getting paid either nothing or peanuts for this 'job' but, to the victims who you will be photographing, you're a professional. What do you think your beginner standard photos will do to the reputation of real professional photographers? I've lost count of the number of times that people have told me that they will never hire a professional again, simply because they thought that they had hired one in the past and the results were crap, therefore real professionals are all tarred with the same brush.
Of course, everyone has to start somewhere, and I applaud you for your efforts and self confidence, but a much better way of starting out would be to contact event photographers in your area (the people who specialise in this sort of thing) and find one or more who will allow you to carry their bags for them at similar events, do general labouring work for them and so on, and you will then learn from exposure. That way, nobody gets hurt. Same goes for all other disciplines, if you want to be a wedding photographer then work as a bag carrier for wedding photographers, if you want to be a studio photographer then impress studio photographers with your coffee making skills.
Frankly, the best of your outdoor examples posted above are nothing more than average snapshots, and your indoor ones (so far) are appalling.
If you don't even know how to get amateur-standard snapshots with a very good camera that does nearly all of the thinking for you, if you don't even know what to point the autofocus sensor at, if you don't even notice the background that is going to ruin the shot, if you think that it's OK to shoot at 3000 ISO and if you think that it's OK to mount the flash on the top of your camera, then you are nowhere near ready for this 'job'.
There are two main ingredients in photography, technique and art. There has always been a great 'debate' in photography about technique -v- creativity, with people arguing about which is more important. My own answer is that each is equally important - after all, there is no point in producing a technically-perfect photo that nobody wants to look at, nor is there any point in producing a creative masterpiece that has serious technical shortcomings or that, even if 'perfect', can't be replicated because you don't know how you got the good result in the first place!
Because of this, you should understand the technical ingredients and learn to work within the limitations imposed by both your equipment and your shooting environment. Only then should you start to concentrate on the creative elements of good photography.
Photography isn’t a true science, it’s just a set of craft skills that are based on established scientific principles. We don’t need to know the science in order to gain the skills, but it does help to understand why things work as they do, Right now, you are demonstrating that you have neither technical understanding nor art, and you need to have both.
If you look it up on google you’ll find lots of I’ll-informed clickbait.I have looked at it and am thankful that I am well retired.
But it effects all professional people and event photagraphy.
If you want to be scared look up GDPR+photography.
Lets hope that @willkia will take on the advice and share some good shots that folk will like and say it`s better. Then he can have a choice of what photo editing software I give him.
If you look it up on google you’ll find lots of I’ll-informed clickbait.
I do wish people who ‘aren’t affected ’ wouldn’t then proclaim something they can’t substantiate.