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Hi Iain
Tacky - good idea for the theme and well handled. The bright colours fit the shot. Good focus and dof, but still colour in the b/g. You query whether your trainers should be considered tacky but i would be more concerned with the boyz in the hood jeans :nono:
Value - I get the link to the theme ok. Like the comp and agree with Graham that the marble slab seems to be hovering over the stone floor. Odd perspective but interesting nontheless. Is the grey marble vertical in real life and against a stone wall and you have shot from ground level up? But then I see the triangle cut stones left and right and that leads me to think that they are floorng stones and thos cuts are taking account of a change in level. Intriguing.
Focus seems to fall off slightly at the bottom which i find draws my eye.
Tacky - good idea for the theme and well handled. The bright colours fit the shot. Good focus and dof, but still colour in the b/g. You query whether your trainers should be considered tacky but i would be more concerned with the boyz in the hood jeans :nono:
Value - I get the link to the theme ok. Like the comp and agree with Graham that the marble slab seems to be hovering over the stone floor. Odd perspective but interesting nontheless. Is the grey marble vertical in real life and against a stone wall and you have shot from ground level up? But then I see the triangle cut stones left and right and that leads me to think that they are floorng stones and thos cuts are taking account of a change in level. Intriguing.

Focus seems to fall off slightly at the bottom which i find draws my eye.


I really like your Tacky shot, the over saturated feel and the vignette really work. The gum is a little too false for me and not got that horrible 'never going to get it off your shoe again' look but I totally understand why you've gone for the none gummy stuff!
minor very minor crit would be the black vertical pole thingy on the lhs...pulls my eye a smidge 




