I like the daffodil shot![]()




Catch up time for me.
The studio shots of Cat - Like the pose in the first one, and the clean white background. The h&s shot - you've caught a lovely expression in her eyes but for me the lower haf of her face is a little over-exposed/processed - and if that's what you intended that's great. It looks a bit Venure-ish to me. btw, hard to believe this is your first time in a studio.
Sam - I like the lighting - very moody and contrasty and works well with a black bg. It's potentially very sexy, provocative lighting and I think it would look great with a sexier pose/expression. But again, it's a very small niggle.
Week 12 - I like the 'behind the scenes' feel to this (even though it's out of doors). Everyone looks occupied by the task in hand and I like the little touch of the RAC being printed inside the bonnet.
Week 13 - lovely colours and great composition. This would make a good illustration for a gardening article in a glossy mag!
Week 14 - I can imagine how hard it ws to get that shot and I like the feeling of speed and the ground wizzing by. Unusual angle too - the photo, not Shane.
Jean
Week 14 ticks all the boxes for mealthough tbh all i can think it how do they not fall over
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The whites look a little tad blown on the RHS of him however not shot motorsport, dont care to, so it looks good !![]()
. Its not normally the done thing to have such a tight crop on a motorsport shot, but I like it.
I like it too, even though I know nothing about the subject. The rider and bike are good and sharp, the wheels are clearly moving fast, and I don't understand why you shouldn't crop so tight - this gives a nice crisp, clean shot with nothing to distract from the subject. And the subject has obviously found the solution to defying gravity. Excellent.
Jean
I prefer the newer Bike shot Coming towards you![]()
nice sence of movement on the bike, its good to see him coming towards you![]()
Week 12 & 13 really stand out for me, composition of both is first class![]()
This week saw the Hollyoaks lads take on AC Broxtowe for the third time in a charity football match held at Notts County FC. There was a great atmosphere around the ground, by far the most screaming girls I have ever seen at a football match too! I wonder why that was?! So not such a great game for Hollyoaks, they lost by quite a few goals, think it was six or seven to one.
Week 16 - Calvin Valentine played by Ricky Whittle
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I've never seen Hollyoaks and know nothing about football but if he is a character in Hollyoaks weeeellllll - (looks for swooning emoticon) ....... what channel is it on?![]()
Well captured.It's a pity he's so close to the bg - the shadow's a bit distracting, but I don't suppose you had the option of ask him to move!
Jean
Thanks for the comments jeangenie. For your info its on chanel 4 weekdays at 6.30pm.
I agree on the shadow, but didnt really have the chance to move him. Shame really but i still quite like the image and its my first real "celebrity" image.
She's a gorgeous model and it's always strange working in a new environment.
Rather than me making comments (easy for someone else to say 'why didn't you do this or that'!) can I ask, what would you do differently?
Jean
Some lovely colours in there Ant![]()
Ahh - they're back!
Fran: Yep, I definitely get rid of the flash in the window. I think the bg is ok but it might look good if you throw it out of focus a bit more - and sit her on a simple dark wood chair (something to work with the dark wooden window frame and the stripped wooden floor). A chair would give you lots of posing options too. The ring on her right hand is a bit distracting, imo - it's just catching the light.
I'm sure you took lots of different poses and it would be interesting to compare the lighting - it's a little bit flat on her face (when you guys get to look at her face) but probably works well in other poses. So, yes a great effort and you've put thought into the next session.
Bluebells: I like the composition as it it. The large tree in the right foreground works well, imo, and I think cropping the top would make that out of proportion (if that makes sense!) Well worth the break from revision.
Jean
loving the bluebell shot Ant, nice colours, it is a shame you cant see more of the tress though did you try it in portrait fromat?
Enjoyed the bluebell shot, was good to get some fresh air and even better when i passed the exam on tuesday! Wahoo![]()



awww thats not ugly definate awwww factor and a lovely DoF![]()
He isn't ugly. Quite sweet in fact. I love the detail around the face.
My two thoughts are: things are a bit fuzzy off the centre of the picture. Maybe try a narrower f-number, maybe that would help.
Also his positioning in the frame isn't quite right for me. His tail is falling off the edge. I think it'd look better either taken back a bit to give a little room round the edges, or closer in to concentrate on detail around the face.