Anitacv 52 in 2016

Really like Anita a wonderful building. I may have been tempted to zoom in to get the top of the canopy and the detail of the wooden doors
 
Hi Anita, like entrance. Loads to look at and the detail. I quite like the lamps and may be tempted to crop one and part of the front façade and convert to B&W

Chris
 
Hi Anita

Colourful is a well spotted and well captured image. I think it could even bear a touch more exposure if you wanted to make those colours pop even more... Nice one!

Entrance... shame about the cropping at the top :( but well spotted and good use of PP to straighten the verticals, as that makes a bit difference (y)
 
Covered - I thought it was a covered seat then read your comments and looked properly to see it is indeed covered in graffiti
good spot for the theme.
Colouful - is indeed colourful and full of details I like it.
Entrance - a grand old building as others have said it is a shame you couldn't fit the top in.
 
Hi Anita :)

Entrance - Very grand indeed... shame about the clipped roof detail, but not a deal breaker, as the entrance is the main element theme wise not the entire building, and as PP to rid of distortion as you said is the best option for me - Like It :)

... I like your timing to get a clear frontage too, must have taken a while to wait for no passers by ??
 
Dark Knight said:
Hi Anita :)

... I like your timing to get a clear frontage too, must have taken a while to wait for no passers by ??
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Thank you. When first arrived there were workmen there with ladders and cones right in front of building so I walked off in a huff! Came back a little while later and all was clear [emoji2]
 
Hi Anita

Nothing that hasn't been said really. The shot needs the top of the building for me, but then doesn't scream 'entrance' to me as per @d00d

I'd have been tempted to get right into those lovely entrance doors as suggested by @Downton Mini

Lovely building though and clearly a challenging one to shoot / correct.
 
anitacv said:
Thank you. When first arrived there were workmen there with ladders and cones right in front of building so I walked off in a huff! Came back a little while later and all was clear [emoji2]
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Now there is a stroke of luck :D
 
Hi Anita. Nice clean shot from a moving vehicle and through a windscreen- the subject says it all for Size. Forgotten is my fave of the two - well spotted and I like the old wooden handle of that garden fork/spade. :clap:
 
Anita, I like the forgotten spade/fork really adds to the concept. The missing/forgotten watering can rose. Yes nice
 
Hi Anita.

Size - Nice sharp, bright image and it does sell the theme.
However, the verticals are off. You have Elements 12. Both PSE and ACR have straightening tools (I prefer the one in ACR to the one in PSE), it really is just a 15 second fix, and it improves the end result immensely .

Forgotten - A very pleasing shot. (And not horizontals / verticals for me to moan about ;) )
 
Hi Anita

Love your image for Size great find as Tim has said the verticals are slightly off not sure if this is caused by the truck rolling form side to side on an uneven bit of road though.

A really pleasing image for for forgotten leaves the viewer coming up with al sorts of possible stories to go with the image.
 
Forgotten is great. As a kid Mr McGregor scared me! Of course thats all in the past and forgotten, mostly when I discovered how good rabbit tastes!
 
Size is sharp and it works.

Forgotten is a more serious submission ... nice olde worlde feel, well composed and good detail.
 
Hi Anita

Size is obviously on theme but as a snapshot through the windscreen it was always going to be a challenge compositionally. I think you've caught a few compositions plusses (leading white line, filling the frame etc.) but you were always up against it - needs straightening as well, I think?

Forgotten works far better for me and is still suitably on theme. There might be an element or two too many for me, personally (I usually find simpler is better) but it's a good spot and well captured. Something like this image would be a good one to experiment with different compositions, POVs etc. I'd probably end up taking about 20-30 shots from different places/heights and with different elements in and out of frame...
 
Size - good spot for the theme
Forgotton - lovely garden full of detail and interest I can just imagine Peter Rabbit hiding in the greenery.
 
Nice catch up Anaita, I just love the VW Camper van :)
 
Well done Anita - some real crackers in the set o which Flora and Activity top the list for me. (I've always wanted a VW caravan so that one edges it - beautiful vibrant colours. :clap:
 
Good catch up Anita, stone has great details and tones; that collection of signs made me smile and I love the floral van, could they have got anymore colours on it?
 
Great collection of images. Campervan's a great submission for Flora but would be even better in a different setting. Simple (although some might argue it's not) is a beaut, my pick of the bunch.
 
Hi Anita, catch for my comments too!

Stone - well captured and more challenging dynamic range which you've contained well. Never the most exciting image, but this works well with clouds plus stone texture.
Simple doesn't grab me I'm afraid... there's too much in the frame competing for my attention to be properly simple!!
Signs however works really well - nicely spotted and perfectly captured!
Flora is superb - a really good and different take on the theme!
Activity is snapped well but feels a bit lifeless to me. They're not exactly animated and it just feels as if it needs a bit of revving up?!
 
Hi Anita,
I love the colours of the Van in Flora and the Chairs/Table in Simple, they are the stand out shots of your catch up.
That's not to say there is anything wrong with the others.
Stone has good detail and texture. Signs certainly sells the theme, and the use of following a wall works well.
Activity is the weakest of the 5, purely on the clutter around the musicians.
 
Ha ha ha - nicely conceived and excellent composition with the advert and wet brolly providing stark contrast. :clap:
 
Hi Anita,

simple - I like the colourful chairs and table, but I’m not so sure about the composition
flora - I love that camper van, great vibrant colours
life - that is very well captured, I like the composition very much
 
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