Alsjazzeras 2016 TP 52 WEEK 52 CELEBRATE/CELEBRATION ADDED

stone - as others have said simple and effective
simple - I like the reflections in the spoon again simple and effective
 
Nice simple breakfast there, Allan, simply composed, good idea,

but you forgot the soldiers :D
 
Yup, simple indeed. Well composed...uber crit would be that the plate is slightly closer at the bottom...after 5 1/2 years of TP52....I notice these things :)

Nice conversion, wonderful textures and is that you I can see :)

Cheers.
 
SteveSc said:
Lovely photo for simple. The POV and composition work very well.
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Thank you

posiview said:
Yup, simple indeed. Well composed...uber crit would be that the plate is slightly closer at the bottom...after 5 1/2 years of TP52....I notice these things :)

Nice conversion, wonderful textures and is that you I can see :)

Cheers.
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I did notice that too after I posted :p
And yes I am in there somewhere

Dark Knight said:
Spot on Allan, great composition, textures on the wood and egg, reflection on the spoon, overall subtle lighting and a nice simple snack too, perfect
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Thank you
 
Really like that Allan fits the theme perfectly great composition love the reflection in the spoon.
 
... really like this one Allan. :clap: ... for reasons mentioned above. Plus I like the way we see the entire rim of the eggcup.

It's been pointed out the the plate is not quite central in the frame, well what about having it as off-centre as the egg is on the plate? OK ignore that.
 
I like that Allan for all the reasons mentioned by Ian and Chris. I'm particularly taken with the subtle shading around the egg which gives it form.
 
Both stone and simple very well executed compositions which certainly fit the theme.
 
d00d said:
... really like this one Allan. :clap: ... for reasons mentioned above. Plus I like the way we see the entire rim of the eggcup.

It's been pointed out the the plate is not quite central in the frame, well what about having it as off-centre as the egg is on the plate? OK ignore that.
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Thanks d00d consider it ignored

Carl Ayling said:
I like that Allan for all the reasons mentioned by Ian and Chris. I'm particularly taken with the subtle shading around the egg which gives it form.
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Thanks

pjm1 said:
Hi Allan

Simple is a cracker (boom, boom!) I really like that composition and your choice of POV. Really elegant and expertly shot & processed. Couldn't think of any way to improve it at all... top notch :clap:
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Thanks Paul

LC2 said:
Nicely done Allan, works really well, as does the processing.
Am I the only one trying to see if there's a selfie in the spoon?
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There is sort of a selfie

sparrow said:
Both stone and simple very well executed compositions which certainly fit the theme.
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Thanks
 
Yes, I like both and both of course are well themed. My fave though is Horizontal for the composition but also the detail, colour and most of all the shadows.
 
Blimey, slow down, I can't keep up :p

Stone - like I said in my thread it's so much better than mine. Lovely shadow, nice placement and grounding shadow.

Simple is simply fab, lots of textures and a very clean and simple pic which I bet was the opposite to set up :clap:

Signs is perhaps the weakest of the 4. Maybe it needs to be in colour, maybe in portrait orientation. I don't know....... It looks like something out of Coronation street c1969 ;)

Horizontal is definitely laid back :) or is he stoned :D That could be a twofer :p
 
Plenty of signs in the window, Allan, nice processing too.

Horizontal, I'd say more like "tits up" but what's a shoe horn or two between friends eh?
:D
 
Plenty of signs there Allan love the processing great take on your reshoot made my chuckle.
 
Two good photos there, no shortage of signs with a nice mono conversion, the fly made me smile, well shot
 
chrispp said:
Allan. Both nice photos, signs just right and the re shoot nice re take
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thank you

Carl Ayling said:
Yes, I like both and both of course are well themed. My fave though is Horizontal for the composition but also the detail, colour and most of all the shadows.
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My favourite too, had the idea for it weeks ago but due to the lack of flies had to put it on hold

Bruja said:
Blimey, slow down, I can't keep up :p

Stone - like I said in my thread it's so much better than mine. Lovely shadow, nice placement and grounding shadow.

Simple is simply fab, lots of textures and a very clean and simple pic which I bet was the opposite to set up :clap:

Signs is perhaps the weakest of the 4. Maybe it needs to be in colour, maybe in portrait orientation. I don't know....... It looks like something out of Coronation street c1969 ;)

Horizontal is definitely laid back :) or is he stoned :D That could be a twofer :p
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I get what you mean about portrait it was an option but i quite liked the brickwork, the colour version doesn't work for me though its a picture of the Albion pub in Chester, its happily stuck in a past time.

Cobra said:
Plenty of signs in the window, Allan, nice processing too.

Horizontal, I'd say more like "tits up" but what's a shoe horn or two between friends eh?
:D
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shoehorn, me :wideyed: never mind friends we shall see what our lawyers say about that :shifty:

Downton Mini said:
Plenty of signs there Allan love the processing great take on your reshoot made my chuckle.
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Thank you

sirch said:
Two good photos there, no shortage of signs with a nice mono conversion, the fly made me smile, well shot
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that poor fly suffered for his art :)
 
Sign ... orientation/framing is fine but would like to be able to read more of the writing.

Horizontal ... real nice detail on that expansive GB. Humour too.
 
Hi Allan

I like signs. It just feels rather calming to me for some reason. Well captured and although it's not particularly "of much", not all images have to be.

Horizontal - great detail and looks like the poor fly has been sipping too much beer from the pub above. Well taken.
 
d00d said:
Sign ... orientation/framing is fine but would like to be able to read more of the writing.

Horizontal ... real nice detail on that expansive GB. Humour too.
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specsavers?
thanks d00d

rpn said:
Signs; like the black & white treatment of the shot. Love the total darkness background of the room and the bang on centre position of the main subject.

Re-shoot; Great idea and nice shoehorn. :D
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pjm1 said:
Hi Allan

I like signs. It just feels rather calming to me for some reason. Well captured and although it's not particularly "of much", not all images have to be.

Horizontal - great detail and looks like the poor fly has been sipping too much beer from the pub above. Well taken.
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it isn't of much is it, thanks Paul
 
pjm1 said:
Now that's classic @alsjazzera if ever there's an image that is!!

Love the lighting, the white background (slight vignette in the BL corner) and the addition of the glass jar is inspired. Also love the processing.

Top notch! :clap:
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Thanks Paul, I really wanted a different BG, going to have to find some somewhere, settled on white as I have nothing else but black, left the shadows of the uneven light in as long as the fern looked fine.
 
:clap:I like that a lot - crisp clean bg with simple composition and lovely detail
 
:agree: perfect fern, love the colour gradation along its length, great photo
 
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