Website review Please

[DinoS]

Hi

Afte taking in your last commenst i have taken them onboard and then imporved,

can you tell me what you think now, still any improvemnts you think willbe good please tell me.

Feedback good or Bad please, espically bad so i can improve it

Thanks

Websitehttp://www.visualisetheworld.co.uk

 

[thegman89]

Hey Dude,

I'm a freelance web designer, here's a few pointers here for you:

Keep it consistent - you've got big text on the home page then small text on the rest. Things generally look better if it's the same throughout. To use bold text if you want something to stand out.

Some pages have a PDF, EMAIL and PRINT button at the top - yet others don't?

Also on some pages you have your email address yet on others its a link to the contact page?

Maybe put some images on the text only pages to brighten them up a bit? Your a photographer - so show your work!

Maybe some more text to - you seem to have a lot of one line paragraphs - maybe expand them and add more to them - or join up existing ones - just makes things easier to read.

EDIT::

Also noticed that the page titles in blue are smaller than the subtitles - eg commissions page. General rule is the more important the header the bigger / bolder the font, then work your way down.

Sorry if it sounds like I'm being harsh - but you asked for some ideas for improvements

 

[DinoS]

thanks, you can never be too harsh.

I need all the comments, i agree about the photos idea, i will do that.

thanks

All comments appreicated

 

[inaneredstripe]

erm... newbury photographer based in newbury.

 

[MikeeB]

Spelling mistakes on boat photography page:

Commerical - Commercial
Inital - Initial
Engagment - Engagement

Also the writing in blue at the top of the page Commisions is spelt wrongly.

Commerical - Commercial mistake on gallery page in the intro.

Commision - Commission mistake on print prices page in two places.

Commision - Commission spelt wrongly on boat photography nav button

Sorry to be a pain but spelling mistakes on a website that is meant to advertise yourself and your services to the public just bugs me!

Once you have those sorted it will be a great website, I like the banner logo and the overall theme of the site.