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Right guys, we have an essay to write for English. It has to be an editorial or an article and I decided to write one about photography not being a terrorist. I sent it to my teacher to check it over and he says it is great, but just to pull it up to A*, I need a catchier ending, possibly a photography related pun. Could you guys help me out with ideas? I cant think of anything.

Anyway, here is the last paragraph:
Photography is currently a growing hobby amongst the people in the world. It is becoming more and more popular, due to the rapid advancement in technology and things like camera phones and wireless networks, which enable photos to be taken and shared all over the internet, all the time. The legal system just can’t keep up with the ever-changing technology and its effect on people’s privacy. Everybody (and not just photographers) would benefit from the laws regarding photography and privacy being confirmed and clarified, since at the moment, they are just simply too vague and are causing too much harassment, trouble and unnecessary accusations are being thrown. Clarifying the law would help to clear all the confusion.
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I need a pun at the end, or maybe a funny, photography related sentence, instead of the last sentence.

What do you think guys???

Bart
 
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.....Clarifying the law would help to clear all the confusion, as currently, it all seems too out-of-focus

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lol you have till tuesday, wait till you hit your degree this is when you will look at the question :D
 
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