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hi guys am playing catch up here as i only just started, broken was my first entry, and in another thread, im not sure how to change the thread title as others have done, so if anyone can tell me how to, that would be great and they can all go in the same one.

Anyway here is TWISTED, added a small amount of gausian blur and mist for effect, hope you like my take on the title
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And here is my take on HIDDEN, a lot more simple this one, just a little bit of cropping to get rid of a couple of distractions, with my daughter you have to be quick and take the snap when it presents itself :lol: anyhow, hope you like.
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As always any comments are always appreciated and listened to

Markyboy
 
Hi, there, your twisted is, well, twisted...very eerie and spooky and worrying...;)

I'd like to see the blacks boosted a tad.

Hidden made me laugh, 'I can't see you., so you can't see me...!'
 
Might try and have a go at making the black darker then, though think I only saved it as a jpg so not sure if I can thanks for the comments though
 
markyboy80 said:
Might try and have a go at making the black darker then, though think I only saved it as a jpg so not sure if I can thanks for the comments though
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yes your black and white points are of here is the black and white point set looks more contrast now, But it not one for me.
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I like twisted, perfect for the theme and nice to see something a little different. I also like the PP you've done to give it that surreal, floating look. As has been said the blacks are a little off but for me that doesn't detract from the image. Well done.

Hidden is funny, made me smile. It's a good capture & again, right on theme.
 
I like the voodoo doll style shot, although I think the mist you've added takes away from the photo. I honestly don't know where you'd put this, but maybe in a location to add a little menace to the image would work well, like a darkened room with candle light/blown out.

The kid hiding amused me, it reminds me of how shy I was when I was a kid and used to do the same thing, or just hide behind the sofa :D
 
Thanks for all the comments so far as a beginner I'm really happy with the way everyone seems to give me positive feedback and fair honest criticism
 
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