My first video...

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Shot my first video today, using my D7000, 35mm 1.8 and iMovie.
I'm pretty happy with the outcome, although these lots of bits I think I can improve on, c&c welcome :)
 
I like it, a different location would improve it massively but I dont know how possible that would be for you
 
a few things:

couple of scenes where the camera is on the wonk.
when filming a car, make sure its washed and waxed, looks a lot better.
you need to be careful with moving shots and vibrations.

It looks like you were trying different techniques rather than showing off the car or telling a story. Started off well, looks like we were going on a journey, only to end up with slow moving footage of you driving in a car park. Also ending on the badge at the end, I didn't see what that really had to do with anything.

Oh, and do you know your car's got an illegal rear plate and is also breaking the law having no front plate? Fine up to £1000 for the rear plate (usually fixed penalty of £60) and £60 fixed penalty for the front. Even if they are just show plates you could face trouble if its public property. I had a warning for the german plates on my corrado.
 
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a few things:

It looks like you were trying different techniques rather than showing off the car or telling a story. Started off well, looks like we were going on a journey, only to end up with slow moving footage of you driving in a car park. Also ending on the badge at the end, I didn't see what that really had to do with anything.

This, basically. Bokeh =/= Automatic good footage.
 
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