weekly Kazazoo's 52 2013 Juxtaposition added

Hi Kaz


quitting is not an option :nono: Time must be short for you with 2 little'uns but keep going....it's worth it for sure :thumbs:

I'm not a fan of kiddie shots so difficult to crit but I do feel the Gluttony shot would have been better straight on rather than the up angle....less nose if you know what I mean.

Time...has the makings of a lovely shot....peace n quiet for you & a great reminder of how delicate & cute they can be :thumbs:

Space...thats playing tricks with my eye's....like the subtle tones ...one minute it's a tunnel to look down the next I'm seeing it from the narrow through to the wider bottom..if that makes any sense ??

Keep going :thumbs:
 
I'd also say try to find the time to keep going - if only due to the fact that it means you make time to get shots like your nap-time one.

I think that's lovely, crop a slice off the top, clone out the small mark on the sheet by the forehead and that's well worthy of being in a frame on the mantelpiece.

You don't want to look back and wish you had more shots of them when they were little and nap-time (the image) is priceless.
 
Thanks for your replies i'll keep going.
Overbex-I didn't notice the spec on sheet till you pointed it out, need to get editing

Juxtaposition...

The natural and unnatural

IMG_7440jux 1.psd by kazzy2001, on Flickr

I'd like to get out again maybe a little green and the blurry twig in front is annoying!
 
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I think the focus point makes the can the subject of this image which - to me - is not on theme. Sorry.


I can see where you are coming from though. And you're still with us.

Keep it up!
 
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Hi, like is a bit crowbarred but it's an interesting take. Littering is one of my pet peeves.

Crit, just a bit close for me.

Cheers.
 
K, some nice shots here. That lad is definitely enjoying his gruffalo, and the shot has a great life to it. The Nap Time shot... I love, really love the sleeping face, but I'd disturbed by the OOF cot bars on either side. Was it possible to get jsut a tiny bit closer?

I was wondering about a shot like your juxtaposition one. It's a tough theme, especially if you don't have much time. I think a lot of it has worked really well, but the OOF plant in the foreground, and especially the dead grass stalk, are a bit disturbing. Sometimes a little judicious weeding helps clear the shot. OOF foreground can work, but it's a bit up front and central; if it was near the edge, or contributed more to the leading lines, it might work a bit better. But a nice vision, anyway...
 
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