weekly jpye88's - 52 in 2013 - Week 1 Sin Added

[jpye88]

My 52's thread week one will be up shortly

 

[blondie606]

Hi Jack...welcoome aboard

Look forward to seeing your shots mister

 

[jpye88]

My First upload of the year

 

[jpye88]

My First Upload of the year - Sin

 

[The goblin]

Hi Jack, welcome to this years 52 and TP

Cigarettes are definitely a sin, great DOF draws your eye to the warning

 

[blakester]

Welcome to the 52 Jack, your first submission is bang on theme
Just a wee bit tight on the crop but other than that good start. Iain

 

[posiview]

Never understood why people spoke. Sin indeed. Important bit are in, apart from a slight clipping not eh bottom. Decent focus, just watch the white balance.

Cheers.

 

[mich66]

fits the theme.. good focus and DOF.. great start!

 

[blondie606]

Hi Jack


right on theme , like the DOF which draws your eye to the words

Cropped a little hard at the bottom & , for me, a little tight at the top - bit more room wouldn't go amiss

Good start mister...see ya in week 2

 

[Allan.H]

have to agree with everyone else about the cropping

 

[Dark Knight]

Hi Jack - Belated welcome

Sin - Crit as others, but like your idea and how you have set it up

 

[z1805]

Same take as me, two people with bad habits I've got the same comments about the cropping, and maybe would have been nice to have all of the warning in focus.

(And what a waste of a cigarette...)

 

[Kerioak]

Hi Jack and Welcome to TP

Like your picture and definitely fits the theme, it looks a little pink on my screen, maybe cooling down the white balance would sort this.