DBBROWNY WEEK 5 PHOTO 52

Great capture mate... you live in a great area for costal shots... good work!

You have been better doing all your 52 on one thread...
 
Hi David

Thats a lovely shot :thumbs:
 
thanks everyone..and i'l put everything in one thread from now.
cheers.
 
Beautiful shot. Really good composition and the light is very good. The light on the sea is great. That's a nice sky and it contrasts well with the sea.

Overall the focus is good, but the OOF area bottom right detracts a little. I might have been tempted to include a bit more sky in the shot.

Great pic:thumbs:
 
Week 6 - clutter. I certainly agree that constitutes clutter. For the composition i would crop out that dull sky and slice up the right hand side to beside the TV. Then a quick play on levels to give a little more punch as it looks a trifle overexposed to me :(

Week 7 - delicate. that is one delicate flower, but again i feel it is overexposed. In terms of your composition I would place the flower on the cross of th thirds. these are glorious colours, lovely and vibrant :thumbs:

I like your take on chaos ;) A beautiful view but the image is unbalanced as most of the interest is on the right hand side. Could you have used a different perspective to perhaps have the boat on the left of a composition with the island to the right?

I just read that back and it seems a bit negative, not my intention :$
 
Hi David

just having a quick catch up as sooo many threads to look at.

Clutter works well for me, possibly cropped too tight on the left but the B&W works well :thumbs:

Delicate is a great idea but a touch too bright though the colors are gorgeous:thumbs:

Chaos...a different slant on the theme but a beautiful shot & understand your thinking behind it . Personnaly, that there is more going on in the right handside of the shot than the left adds another dimension to chaos ,as the right is more chaotic than the left...if that makes sense ?
 
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