Club Photography Critique

[Aidan Morrissey]

Hi Guys,

I recently started working as a nightclub photographer,. on my first weekend I learned a lot, but I am not completely happy with all of them, looking for opinions on what everyone thinks, and how could I make mundane photos like the second one better? Also, just for fun, the third one shows a lady rushing through three girls trying to catch a guy as he passes out. Check out the drink in mid-air haha.

 

[UaeExile]

If your looking to do something different and eye catching, you could get a ring light. Even make your own.

You could drag your shutter as well to let in more ambient and give it a sense of motion.

 

[juggler]

The background of the second one lets it down; it has no context to show that it's a club, just a great big flash reflection. Could you have shot parallel to the wall instead of flat on to it?