weekly ClaffClaff's 52 - FEAR ADDED!!!

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Hi Cary's....waiting....waiting...:)
 
Hi Cary, welcome to TP and welcome to the 52 challange :)

Look forward to seeing some photos..
 
Good first effort, look forward to seeing the next 51 :D
 
Hi Carys,

I like your first 2 weeks photos, and looking forward to the rest.
For me on Fear, I would have made a couple of steps right and inwards to get a lower DoF to get the angle of looking slightly up at the house.

Chris
 
Hi Carys, a very nice start on the 52 and welcome aboard :D
The second one personally i would look out for a dramatic/moody sky behind it if a reshoot is possible, just to give it that really eerie feeling and then enhance it by playing with the levels in whatever PP program you use.
Just my opinion but a great idea well shot,
Good luck with the other 50
Best wishes
Cliff
 
Direction : that works and fits the theme nicely

Fear : What a creepy old, rundown, house. I'm gonna agree with Cliff... get a really moody sky in behind it... but.. an excellent find and a great idea for it... I don't know what's to the left, but it might look better with the end of the garage left in
 
Thanks for the feedback everyone.

There was a fence in front of the house and could just get my camera in through the a gap in it, hence the angle and distance. Saying that, I could try take it from a lower angle and then edit it out the fence lines (I'm still a novice with that though!). So, I think I'll go back at somepoint and try get another shot of it from a lower angle and when the sky is a bit more dramatic. Will repost it when I get round to it! :)

Cheers guys. :thumbs:
 
Hi Carys

A couple of good images with apt interpretations of theme. Like the use of the Risk board for your Direction entry and the abandoned house is definately a good subject for Fear.

Looking at both images, my pointer might be to look at overall composition. As has already been said, look for alternative / stronger angles. In the Direction pic, slightly lower and ommitting the cards in the foreground; in your Fear pic, shooting more square on, and at a lower / wider angle.

Cheers

Spooks
 
Hi, Carys, welcome aboard.

Rick...loved that game :thumbs:

Well composed, on theme.

I'd like to see an opposition piece somewhere, possible on the bottom border of India.

Fear, creepy indeed...but you should have gone inside for a better photograph :D Pity you've cropped the garage. Perhaps pan left and loose the right hand trees??

Cheers.
 
HI Carys

great start to your project :thumbs:

Direction...not heard of the game but lovely shot...great colors & spot on for the theme :thumbs:

Fear...def a bit creepy , all my thoughts have been mentioned so just a :thumbs: from me

Look foward to seeing your next images :)
 
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